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Giám khảo

Have you ever borrowed money from others?

Thí sinh

Yes I tried before in last week. The payment machine of restaurant wash doesn't work and I don't have any money in my wallet so I have to borrowed from my friend and I paid him through E payment.

Giám khảo

Have you ever lent money to others?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had, my friend tried to borrow money from me and because he didn't bring the wallet outside and he immediately returned the money through the E payment. It is very convenient.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Have you ever borrowed money from others?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 用更自然且语法正确的句子回答,注意时态一致和动词形式;回答要简洁并包含一到两句具体细节,用连接词使语意连贯。例如将“tried before in last week”改为“borrowed money last week”,将“wash”改为“was”,将“have to borrowed”改为“had to borrow”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I borrowed money from a friend last week because the restaurant's card machine wasn't working and I had no cash. Fortunately, I repaid him immediately via a mobile payment app.

Have you ever lent money to others?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 避免语法错误并使句子更连贯;用一到两句概述事实并补充具体细节或感受。注意代词和时态,例如将“Yes, I had”改为“Yes, I have”或“Yes, I have lent money”,并在句中使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have lent money to a friend once when he forgot his wallet. He paid me back straight away via a mobile payment app, which was very convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes I tried before in last week.

Yes, I tried last week.

原句中時態為過去式“tried”是正確的,但詞語搭配不當。短語“in last week”不符合英語習慣,應改為“last week”表示在上週。建議記住時間副詞與過去式搭配的常用表達,如“yesterday,” “last week,” “last month.”

Verb in the past participle form

× The payment machine of restaurant wash doesn't work and I don't have any money in my wallet so I have to borrowed from my friend and I paid him through E payment.

The restaurant's payment machine wasn't working and I didn't have any money in my wallet, so I had to borrow from my friend and I paid him through e-payment.

原句包含多處問題:1) “wash doesn't work” 應為“wasn't working”或“didn't work”,因為描述的是過去發生的情況,應使用過去時態;2) “I don't have” 應與過去情境一致為“didn't have”;3) “have to borrowed” 是助動詞與動詞形式錯誤,應為“had to borrow”——過去時的情態“had to”後接動詞原形;4) “The payment machine of restaurant” 不自然,改為“the restaurant's payment machine”。建議:保持時態一致(既然在說過去,就全部用過去時),情態動詞後接原形動詞。

Past tense issue

× Yes, I had, my friend tried to borrow money from me and because he didn't bring the wallet outside and he immediately returned the money through the E payment. It is very convenient.

Yes, I have. My friend tried to borrow money from me because he didn't bring his wallet, and he immediately returned the money through e-payment. It was very convenient.

原句問題:1) 回答“Yes, I had” 時態和語意不符,對“Have you ever...?” 常用現在完成時“Yes, I have.”;2) “didn't bring the wallet outside” 不自然,應為“he didn't bring his wallet”並把所有代詞與名詞一致;3) 整句時態混亂,描述過去事件用過去時(tried/didn't/returned),評價經驗則用過去或現在完成亦可,為保持一致將最後句改為“It was very convenient.” 建議:對“Have you ever...?” 問題用“Yes, I have.”;注意所有代詞(his)和名詞的一致性;保持時態一致。

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