App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and correcting grammar. Also, provide clearer reasons for your preference using linking words.

Ví dụ: I have recently used several apps like Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter. Among them, I use Facebook the most because it offers a variety of entertaining content, such as reels and memes, which keep me engaged.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to avoid repeating words and finish your sentences clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your interest in these apps.

Ví dụ: I am usually interested in social media apps like Facebook and Instagram because they are useful for staying connected with friends and provide entertaining content that keeps me engaged.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to organize your response logically and use correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about the methods you use to discover apps.

Ví dụ: I usually find new apps through the App Store or Google Play Store. Additionally, I discover apps by seeing advertisements on social media platforms.

Gợi ý: Your answer is vague and contains filler words. Try to be more specific about the types of apps you want to use and avoid unnecessary fillers. Use linking words to explain how these apps will benefit you.

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to use apps that help me with my studies and daily chores because they would make my life easier and help me relax.

× I recently used so many apps such as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter, but I use the Facebook most because Facebook has so many entertained things such as reels, memes, I I.

✓ I recently used so many apps such as Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter, but I use Facebook the most because Facebook has so many entertaining things such as reels and memes.

The word 'entertained' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'entertaining' to describe things that provide entertainment. Also, 'the Facebook' is incorrect; 'Facebook' should be used without 'the' as it is a proper noun. Additionally, 'I I' seems to be a repetition error and should be removed.

× I'm interested in several apps such as Facebook and Instagram because these these apps are so useful and it helps me to be always entertained and I feel very entertained whenever I use the.

✓ I'm interested in several apps such as Facebook and Instagram because these apps are so useful and they help me to always be entertained, and I feel very entertained whenever I use them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to multiple apps; 'they' should be used for plural antecedents. Also, 'these these' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'these'. The sentence was incomplete at the end; 'them' is added to complete the thought referring to the apps.

× I find out different apps through App Store or I have Android phones to phone too. So I found find my apps through social media and through advertisements.

✓ I find different apps through the App Store or on my Android phone too. So I find my apps through social media and advertisements.

The phrase 'find out different apps' is incorrect; 'find' is the correct verb here. 'Through App Store' should be 'through the App Store' because 'App Store' is a specific place requiring the definite article. 'I have Android phones to phone too' is unclear and corrected to 'on my Android phone too' to indicate the device used. 'Found find' is a repetition error and corrected to 'find' to maintain present tense consistency.

× That's a very interesting question. Uh, I would like to use an app such as which will help me on my study and on my chores and I will find very relax, uh, from this app.

✓ That's a very interesting question. Uh, I would like to use an app that will help me with my studies and my chores, and I will find it very relaxing to use this app.

The phrase 'such as which' is incorrect; it should be 'that' to introduce a defining relative clause. 'Help me on my study' should be 'help me with my studies' for correct preposition and plural form. 'I will find very relax' is incorrect; it should be 'I will find it very relaxing' to use the correct adjective form and include the pronoun 'it' as the object.