App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“most frequent”应为“most frequently”，以及句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子流畅性，避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: I have recently used WeChat the most because I rely heavily on my phone to communicate with others. It is a convenient app that helps me stay connected with my friends and family.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如缺少be动词“am”在“I usually interested”中，且表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达兴趣，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I am usually interested in social media apps like Little Redbook and TED Talks. I use them almost every day because watching bloggers helps me learn about different people and makes me feel like I have online friends, which I find very interesting.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“the has an App Store”应为“there is an App Store”。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I find out about different apps in several ways. For example, my friends often recommend apps to me, and since I use an Apple device, I can also browse and download apps from the App Store.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“social media apps is”应为“social media apps are”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的语法和丰富细节，使回答更具体和连贯。

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to continue using social media apps because they help me stay updated on current events and learn daily skills from bloggers, which I find very interesting.

× Well, I think the apps that I use most frequent is WeChat, because nowadays I heavily rely on mobile to communicate and get in touch with each other.

✓ Well, I think the apps that I use most frequently are WeChat, because nowadays I heavily rely on mobile phones to communicate and get in touch with each other.

这里“apps”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是“is”。“most frequent”应改为副词形式“most frequently”修饰动词“use”。“mobile”应具体为“mobile phones”，更符合表达习惯。

× Well, I usually interested in social media apps such as Little Redbook and Ted Talks.

✓ Well, I am usually interested in social media apps such as Little Redbook and Ted Talks.

“usually interested”缺少系动词“am”，完整表达应为“am interested”，表示现在的状态。

× I use them frequently almost everyday.

✓ I use them frequently almost every day.

“everyday”是形容词，表示“日常的”，此处应使用副词短语“every day”表示“每天”。

× I think watching the bloggers in the Subs can let me know about others and it seems that they are my online friends, which was quite interesting.

✓ I think watching the bloggers in the Subs can let me know about others and it seems that they are my online friends, which is quite interesting.

“which”指代前面的情况，时态应与当前时态一致，故用“is”而非“was”。

× There are many ways I can download different apps, for example through my friend's recommendation and also I use Apple system so the has an App Store for me to download.

✓ There are many ways I can download different apps, for example through my friend's recommendation, and also I use the Apple system so it has an App Store for me to download.

“Apple system”前应加定冠词“the”，且“the has”应改为“it has”，指代前文的“Apple system”。

× Well, I may keep on my habits.

✓ Well, I may keep up my habits.

“keep on”用法不当，正确表达习惯保持应为“keep up”。

× I think social media apps is still my favorite even in the future because through the social media I can know about the current events and learn some daily skills through the Blogger.

✓ I think social media apps are still my favorite even in the future because through social media I can know about current events and learn some daily skills through bloggers.

“social media apps”是复数，谓语应用“are”。“the social media”中“social media”通常不加冠词。Blogger应复数形式“bloggers”，表示多个博主。

× It was quite interesting.

✓ It is quite interesting.

根据上下文，表达的是现在或将来的兴趣，时态应为现在时“is”，而非过去时“was”。