App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“let me think on”应为“let me think of”，“like to viewing”应为“like to watch”。建议注意动词形式和介词的正确使用，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

Ví dụ: I have recently used several apps such as TikTok, Xiaohongshu, WeChat, and QQ. I enjoy chatting with my family and friends on WeChat and QQ, and watching videos on TikTok.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“social medias”应为“social media”，“I love to have conversation”应为“I love to have conversations”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: I am usually interested in social media apps. I enjoy having conversations with my family and friends, watching videos, and reading comments online because they are very entertaining.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“find out different apps on another app”应为“discover different apps through other apps”，“Someone recommend”应为“Someone recommends”。建议注意时态和表达的连贯性。

Ví dụ: I often discover new apps through other apps like TikTok or Xiaohongshu. When someone recommends an app, I download it and find out if it is interesting.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“I suppose to use”应为“I would like to use”，“I can study on AI and find out something. Some questions.”表达不完整。建议使用完整句子并清晰表达观点。

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to use AI-based apps like Doobao, Deep Sick, or Changeability. I believe AI is very useful, and these apps can help me study and find answers to my questions.

× In WeChat and QQ I like to chat with my families and friends, and in Tiktok I like to viewing the videos.

✓ In WeChat and QQ I like to chat with my family and friends, and in Tiktok I like to view the videos.

动词不定式后面不应该接动名词形式。这里 'like to viewing' 应改为 'like to view'。另外，'families' 应为单数 'family'，因为指的是自己的家庭。

× In WeChat and QQ I like to chat with my families and friends, and in Tiktok I like to viewing the videos.

✓ In WeChat and QQ I like to chat with my family and friends, and in Tiktok I like to view the videos.

'families' 是复数形式，但这里指的是自己的家庭，应该用单数 'family'。

× Social medias. Oh, the apps I had mentioned were all social medias.

✓ Social media. Oh, the apps I had mentioned were all social media.

'media' 是不可数名词，表示媒体，不能加复数 's'。

× I love to have conversation with my family and friends and watch videos or just view the comments of people on the Internet.

✓ I love to have conversations with my family and friends and watch videos or just view the comments of people on the Internet.

'conversation' 应为复数 'conversations'，因为表示多次对话。

× It has a lot of fun.

✓ It is a lot of fun.

'have fun' 是固定搭配，'It has a lot of fun' 语法错误，应改为 'It is a lot of fun'。

× Haha I often find out different apps on another app like TikTok or sahong Shu.

✓ Haha I often find different apps through other apps like TikTok or Xiaohongshu.

'find out' 通常用于发现事实或信息，发现应用应使用 'find'。'on another app' 应改为 'through other apps'。

× Haha I often find out different apps on another app like TikTok or sahong Shu.

✓ Haha I often find different apps through other apps like TikTok or Xiaohongshu.

'app' 单数应改为复数 'apps'，因为指多个应用。

× Someone recommend this app and I download it and I find out this app is interesting just like this.

✓ Someone recommended this app and I downloaded it and I found out this app is interesting just like this.

描述过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式 'recommended', 'downloaded', 'found'。

× In the future, I suppose to use apps like Doobao, Deep Sick or Changeability.

✓ In the future, I am supposed to use apps like Doobao, Deep Sick or Changeability.

'suppose to' 需要助动词 'am' 来构成被动语态，表示计划或预期。

× I think AI is useful in the future, just for me, I can study on AI and find out something.

✓ I think AI is useful in the future, just for me, I can study AI and find out something.

'study' 后面不需要介词 'on'，直接加宾语。