App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇使用错误（如"attack my speaking level"应为"improve my speaking level"），句子结构不够清晰，建议使用更准确的表达，并简化句子结构，使回答更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Recently, I have been using an app called Ever Speaking. It helps me improve my speaking skills by giving useful advice. Since I am preparing for English exams, this app is very helpful for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够准确。建议减少语气词，使用正确的语法结构，并用更具体的词汇描述感受，使回答更自然且连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually enjoy cooking game apps because they help me relax after a busy day. For instance, when I feel tired, I like to play these games since they don't require much thinking and are very soothing.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，直接回答问题并提供具体细节，使表达更清晰自然。

Ví dụ: I usually discover new apps by browsing the App Store. I find it interesting because there are many different kinds of apps, and I like to explore their features and functions.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在语法错误和词汇重复。建议注意语法一致性，避免重复词汇，并用更自然的表达方式描述观点。

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to use artificial intelligence apps like ChatGPT. As AI develops, these apps can make our lives more convenient and help me work more efficiently.

× It must be ever speaking because it's an app which could attack my speaking level and give me some advice to improve my ability because nowadays I'm prepared for my English exams so it's very useful for me.

✓ It must be Ever Speaking because it's an app which can improve my speaking level and give me some advice to improve my ability because nowadays I'm preparing for my English exams so it's very useful for me.

这里“must be”用来表达推测是正确的，但“could attack my speaking level”中的“attack”用词不当，应改为“improve”表示提升能力；“could”改为“can”更符合事实能力表达；“I'm prepared”应改为进行时“I'm preparing”，表示正在准备。

× Uh, it must be some cooking game apps because it makes me feel very relaxed after a busy day.

✓ Uh, it must be some cooking game apps because they make me feel very relaxed after a busy day.

主语“some cooking game apps”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”，而不是单数“makes”。

× For example, if I feel very tired, I like to, uh, play this games once a time, umm, because it don't need my brain to make some uh, seeking and so it's very relaxable.

✓ For example, if I feel very tired, I like to, uh, play this game once in a while, umm, because it doesn't need my brain to do some thinking and so it's very relaxing.

“this games”中“games”是复数，但前面用“this”指示单数，应改为“this game”；“once a time”应为习惯表达“once in a while”；“it don't”应为“it doesn't”，主谓一致；“make some seeking”用词错误，应为“do some thinking”；“relaxable”不是正确形容词，应改为“relaxing”。

× I have a Hobbit is just scoring the App Store.

✓ I have a habit of just browsing the App Store.

原句结构混乱，“Hobbit”应为“habit”，“is just scoring”表达不当，应改为“just browsing”，使句子结构完整且语义清晰。

× I find it very interesting because in that in the stores there are a lot of different kind of apps apps and I like to watch the fun, the functions of this apps.

✓ I find it very interesting because in the stores there are a lot of different kinds of apps and I like to look at the fun functions of these apps.

“different kind of apps”应为复数“different kinds of apps”；“this apps”应为复数指示代词“these apps”；“watch the fun, the functions”表达不自然，改为“look at the fun functions”更合适。

× With the development of artificial intelligence, our life become more convenient, and the artificial intelligence app can help me make my job, make my work more efficient efficiency.

✓ With the development of artificial intelligence, our life becomes more convenient, and the artificial intelligence app can help me do my job and make my work more efficient.

“life become”应为第三人称单数形式“life becomes”；“make my job”表达不准确，应为“do my job”；“more efficient efficiency”重复，应去掉“efficiency”，用“more efficient”修饰“work”。