App— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
What apps have you recently used?
Thí sinh
Recently I have installed an app that can record my expenditure. It is able to import automatically the spending data from the paying software and I don't need to manually record them.
Giám khảo
What kinds of apps are you usually interested in?
Thí sinh
Usually I'm interested in apps that can make me more concentrated on my study. There are some apps I have installed that can block the use of my phone and only allow me to have a look at the time and so that I can keep focused on my work.
Giám khảo
How do you find out different apps?
Thí sinh
My friends will recommend me to download some of them and tell me how to use them productively and also I will regularly see the recommendations from the App Store.
Giám khảo
What kinds of apps would you like to use in the future?
Thí sinh
I think I would like to use To Do List apps in the future because they can help me be more organized and improve my productivity. They allow me to keep track of my daily tasks and deadlines so I don't forget important things.
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Part 1
What apps have you recently used?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但句子结构稍显重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议使用更地道的表达方式，如将“import automatically”改为“automatically import”，并避免重复使用“record”。
Ví dụ: Recently, I installed an app that automatically imports my spending data from payment software, so I don't have to record expenses manually.
What kinds of apps are you usually interested in?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但表达略显冗长且有语法错误，如“make me more concentrated”应为“help me concentrate better”。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达。
Ví dụ: I usually prefer apps that help me concentrate on my studies, such as those that block phone usage except for checking the time, which helps me stay focused.
How do you find out different apps?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“recommend me to download”应为“recommend that I download”。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意句子连贯性。
Ví dụ: My friends often recommend useful apps and show me how to use them effectively. Additionally, I regularly check the App Store's recommendations.
What kinds of apps would you like to use in the future?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。建议在句子间加入连接词如“because”或“which”。
Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to use To Do List apps because they help me stay organized and improve my productivity by allowing me to track daily tasks and deadlines, ensuring I don't forget important things.
Ngữ pháp
× My friends will recommend me to download some of them and tell me how to use them productively and also I will regularly see the recommendations from the App Store.
✓ My friends will recommend that I download some of them and tell me how to use them productively, and also I will regularly see the recommendations from the App Store.
在英语中，动词'recommend'后面通常接从句，不能直接跟宾语加不定式结构。正确用法是'recommend that + 主语 + 动词原形'。这里应使用'recommend that I download'而不是'recommend me to download'。
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