App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法不完整的问题，建议避免重复词汇，使用完整句子表达观点，并增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Recently, I have been using an app called Out Speaking. It helps me practice my English speaking skills and provides useful suggestions for improvement, which I find very helpful.

Gợi ý: 回答缺少主语且有重复词汇，建议使用完整句子并避免重复，同时增加具体细节和连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I am usually interested in apps like UMM, which allow me to browse short videos similar to TikTok. I enjoy these apps because they offer a wide variety of content that matches my interests.

Gợi ý: 回答中有过多的语气词和不完整句子，建议减少填充词，使用完整句子，并通过连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: Firstly, you can find different apps in app stores, such as the one on the iPhone. Moreover, while browsing short videos, some vloggers often recommend useful apps, which helps me discover new ones.

Gợi ý: 回答表达清晰但略显简单，建议使用更多具体例子和连接词，丰富内容，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to use artificial intelligence apps because AI is very useful nowadays. For example, it can assist with tasks like writing and speaking, which would greatly improve my productivity.

× Uh, recently, I usually use use the app uh, out speaking.

✓ Uh, recently, I usually use the app, Out Speaking.

句子中“use use”重复，应删除一个“use”。此外，应用名称应首字母大写，且句子时态和副词“usually”搭配正确。

× It can train my speaking in English and give some suggestions to improve my speaking.

✓ It can train my English speaking and give some suggestions to improve my speaking.

“train my speaking in English”表达不自然，改为“train my English speaking”更符合英语习惯。

× So I think it's very useful for.

✓ So I think it's very useful.

句子末尾“for”无宾语，导致结构不完整，应删除。

× Are usually interested in the app UMM which could browse short videos on it like the TikTok because I can see much much content which I'm keen on on these apps.

✓ I am usually interested in the app UMM, which allows me to browse short videos like TikTok because I can see a lot of content that I'm keen on in these apps.

缺少主语“I am”，动词“could browse”应改为“allows me to browse”更准确，重复“much much”应改为“a lot of”，介词“on on”重复，应改为“in”。

× Uh, first you can find different apps in the app stores, uh, uh, like uh, in the iPhone.

✓ Uh, first you can find different apps in the app stores, like on the iPhone.

“in the iPhone”应改为“on the iPhone”，因为设备上使用介词“on”。

× And moreover, you can find out more apps when you are browsing the short videos.

✓ Moreover, you can find more apps when you are browsing short videos.

“find out more apps”不自然，应改为“find more apps”；“the short videos”中“the”不必要，应删除。

× Some vloggers may suggest some useful.

✓ Some vloggers may suggest some useful apps.

句子缺少宾语，应补充“apps”使句子完整。

× I think I may prefer the apps in artificial intelligence in the future because nowadays we all know that the AI is very, very useful and it can help us with many things like writing and speaking.

✓ I think I would prefer apps related to artificial intelligence in the future because nowadays we all know that AI is very useful and it can help us with many things like writing and speaking.

“may prefer”表达不准确，改为“would prefer”更符合表达未来意愿；“the apps in artificial intelligence”应改为“apps related to artificial intelligence”；“the AI”中“the”可省略。