Part 1
Giám khảo
What apps have you recently used?
Thí sinh
I have used AI or ID technology apps recently. For example, may I use ChatGPT or podcast to improve my English skills? These apps are very useful for improving my English skills.
Giám khảo
What kinds of apps are you usually interested in?
Thí sinh
I'm interested in running apps and this is because I focus on studying English here in these days and new hair running apps will help me improve my English skills.
Giám khảo
How do you find out different apps?
Thí sinh
I usually search for Internet browser or social networking services like X or Instagram to find any apps. For instance, I have find ChatGPT very useful in the post of X.
Giám khảo
What kinds of apps would you like to use in the future?
Thí sinh
It's difficult to predict the future, but I believe a healthy app will be used more by many people in the future. For example, healthy apps will help us stay healthy by teaching delicious, delicious foods.
What apps have you recently used?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で、文法的な誤りや冗長な表現があります。例えば、「may I use ChatGPT or podcast」という表現は質問の形になっており、答えとして適切ではありません。より自然で効果的な答え方を心がけ、具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。
Ví dụ: Recently, I have been using AI-based apps like ChatGPT and various podcast apps to improve my English skills. These apps provide interactive and engaging ways to practice listening and speaking.
What kinds of apps are you usually interested in?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 内容が混乱しており、意味が伝わりにくいです。「new hair running apps」という表現は不明瞭で、文法的にも誤りがあります。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べ、具体的な例を挙げることが重要です。
Ví dụ: I am usually interested in running apps because they help me track my exercise and stay healthy. Additionally, I use language learning apps to improve my English skills.
How do you find out different apps?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 文法ミス("I have find")や不自然な表現があります。より正確な文法を使い、具体的な方法や経験を詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。
Ví dụ: I usually discover new apps by browsing the internet and checking social media platforms like X and Instagram. For example, I found ChatGPT through a post on X, and it has been very useful for me.
What kinds of apps would you like to use in the future?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表現が繰り返しで冗長です。また、「healthy apps will help us stay healthy by teaching delicious, delicious foods」という部分は意味が不明瞭です。より具体的で明確な説明を心がけましょう。
Ví dụ: Although it's hard to predict, I think health-related apps will become more popular in the future. For instance, these apps might provide healthy recipes and tips to help people maintain a balanced diet.
× For example, may I use ChatGPT or podcast to improve my English skills?
✓ For example, I may use ChatGPT or podcasts to improve my English skills.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'may I' which is a question form, but the sentence is a statement. Also, 'podcast' should be plural to match 'ChatGPT' as apps. The correction changes the sentence to a statement with correct modal verb usage and plural noun.
× For example, may I use ChatGPT or podcast to improve my English skills?
✓ For example, I may use ChatGPT or podcasts to improve my English skills.
The noun 'podcast' should be plural 'podcasts' to correctly refer to multiple apps, matching the context of the sentence.
× I'm interested in running apps and this is because I focus on studying English here in these days and new hair running apps will help me improve my English skills.
✓ I'm interested in running apps because I am focusing on studying English these days, and new running apps will help me improve my English skills.
The phrase 'new hair running apps' is incorrect; 'hair' is unnecessary and likely a mistake. Also, 'here in these days' is awkward; 'these days' suffices. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.
× I have find ChatGPT very useful in the post of X.
✓ I have found ChatGPT very useful in a post on X.
The verb 'find' should be in the past participle form 'found' after 'have'. Also, 'the post of X' is better expressed as 'a post on X'.
× I have find ChatGPT very useful in the post of X.
✓ I have found ChatGPT very useful in a post on X.
The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'on' is the correct preposition to indicate a post on a social media platform.
× healthy apps will help us stay healthy by teaching delicious, delicious foods.
✓ Healthy apps will help us stay healthy by teaching us about delicious, healthy foods.
The repetition of 'delicious' is redundant. Also, 'teaching delicious, delicious foods' is incorrect; apps teach about foods, not the foods themselves. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves grammar.