App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: حاول تحسين وضوح إجابتك وتنظيمها بشكل أفضل. تجنب التكرار والأخطاء اللغوية، واستخدم جمل مترابطة وواضحة لتوصيل أفكارك بشكل أكثر فعالية.

Ví dụ: I often use social media apps like Snapchat, Instagram, Twitter, WhatsApp, and Facebook. I mainly use them to stay connected with my friends and family. These apps allow me to share photos and keep up with the latest news, which helps me communicate easily.

Gợi ý: ركز على تحسين القواعد اللغوية واستخدام الربط بين الجمل لجعل إجابتك أكثر سلاسة وطبيعية. حاول استخدام مفردات متنوعة وشرح الأسباب بشكل أوضح.

Ví dụ: I am usually interested in communication apps, especially WhatsApp. I like it because it allows me to easily send messages and photos to my family and friends. This app helps me stay connected with them even when we are far apart, which is very important to me.

Gợi ý: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر ترابطًا وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية. قدم تفاصيل أكثر تحديدًا عن كيفية اكتشافك للتطبيقات وأمثلة واضحة لدعم إجابتك.

Ví dụ: I usually find out about different apps by browsing app stores and reading user reviews on the Internet. I prefer apps that are easy to use and recommended by many people. For example, one app I use saves time and doesn't take up much space on my phone.

Gợi ý: حاول تنظيم أفكارك بشكل أوضح واستخدم تراكيب لغوية صحيحة. اشرح رغباتك بشكل مفصل مع استخدام مفردات مناسبة وسلسة.

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to use apps like Snapchat because I enjoy sending photos and videos to my friends. I also hope these apps can be improved to be more child-friendly so that many children can use them safely and easily.

× Actually I use many apps in my daily life specially social media platform like Snapchat, Instagram, Twitter, WhatsApp and Facebook.

✓ Actually, I use many apps in my daily life, especially social media platforms like Snapchat, Instagram, Twitter, WhatsApp, and Facebook.

The word 'platform' should be plural 'platforms' because it refers to multiple social media apps. Also, commas are needed for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× I mainly use these apps and to stay connected with my friends and family.

✓ I mainly use these apps to stay connected with my friends and family.

The conjunction 'and' is incorrectly used here, causing a sentence fragment. Removing 'and' corrects the sentence structure.

× There are shared photos and keep up with the with the the left news there are very confused and help me communicate easily.

✓ I share photos and keep up with the latest news; they are very useful and help me communicate easily.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting the sentence structure and word choice clarifies the meaning.

× I like using it because it is allows me to easily send message and photo to my family and friends.

✓ I like using it because it allows me to easily send messages and photos to my family and friends.

The phrase 'it is allows' is incorrect; 'it allows' is correct. Also, 'message' and 'photo' should be plural to match the context.

× It helped me stay connected with them even when we are far apart, which is very important to me.

✓ It helps me stay connected with them even when we are far apart, which is very important to me.

The present tense 'helps' is appropriate here because the action is ongoing, not completed in the past.

× I usually find out about different apps through the Internet, especially by browsing apps stores and reading reviews.

✓ I usually find out about different apps through the Internet, especially by browsing app stores and reading reviews.

The phrase 'apps stores' is incorrect; the correct form is 'app stores'.

× For example, this app saves time and don't take up much space on my phone.

✓ For example, this app saves time and doesn't take up much space on my phone.

The verb 'don't' should be 'doesn't' to agree with the singular subject 'this app'.

× Future in the future I would like to use a missing app like a Snapchat because I enjoy sending photos and videos to my friend.

✓ In the future, I would like to use a messaging app like Snapchat because I enjoy sending photos and videos to my friends.

The phrase 'Future in the future' is redundant and incorrect. 'Missing app' should be 'messaging app'. Also, 'a Snapchat' is incorrect; 'Snapchat' is a proper noun and does not need an article. 'Friend' should be plural to match the context.

× I also hope this app can be improved to my to be more child friend friendly so many children can use it safely and easily.

✓ I also hope this app can be improved to be more child-friendly so many children can use it safely and easily.

The phrase 'to my to be more child friend friendly' is incorrect and redundant. The correct adjective is 'child-friendly'.