App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'stay collected' instead of 'stay connected'. Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence and avoid redundancy. Aim to keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Recently, I have used several apps such as TikTok, WeChat, and Read Note. Among these, I prefer WeChat the most because it helps me stay connected with my family and friends easily. Additionally, we often make video calls, which strengthens our communication.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes like missing auxiliary verbs and awkward word choices such as 'fearful' instead of 'fantastic' or 'amazing'. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to be more specific and clear in your explanations.

Ví dụ: I am usually interested in reading apps because they offer a vast collection of books that I can access anytime. Moreover, they make it convenient to read or listen while on the go. I find these apps amazing because they allow me to explore different worlds through stories.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains several grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'it is most resource' and 'I can't say some advertisement'. Please complete your answer, use correct grammar, and organise your ideas logically with linking words.

Ví dụ: Usually, I download apps from the App Store because it is the most reliable source. Sometimes, I also discover new apps through advertisements and recommendations on social media platforms like Red Notes or TikTok.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions such as 'live in a fast pass society'. Please complete your answer, use correct grammar, and provide specific reasons with linking words to make your response coherent and effective.

Ví dụ: In the future, I would definitely like to use reading apps because we live in a fast-paced society where many people don't have time to read traditional books. These apps make it easier to read anywhere at any time by offering a wide range of books on one platform.

× Among this, I prefer WeChat the most because it allows me to stay collected with my family and friends easily.

✓ Among these, I prefer WeChat the most because it allows me to stay connected with my family and friends easily.

The word 'this' is singular, but it refers to multiple apps, so the plural form 'these' is correct. Also, 'stay collected' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stay connected' to express maintaining communication.

× I usually interested in reading apps because they offer a vast collection of books that I can access anytime.

✓ I am usually interested in reading apps because they offer a vast collection of books that I can access anytime.

The verb 'interested' requires a form of 'to be' before it to form the correct present tense expression. 'I usually interested' is incorrect; it should be 'I am usually interested'.

× Besides, they make it convenient to read or listen on the go and.

✓ Besides, they make it convenient to read or listen on the go.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. Removing 'and' corrects the sentence.

× I found these apps fearful because they allow me to explore different worlds.

✓ I found these apps fascinating because they allow me to explore different worlds.

The adjective 'fearful' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is positive, so 'fascinating' or 'wonderful' is appropriate.

× Usually I download apps from the App Store as it is most resource.

✓ Usually I download apps from the App Store as it is the most resourceful.

The phrase 'most resource' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct adjective is 'resourceful' and requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× Sometimes I can't say some advertisement and recommendations on social media platforms like Red Notes or Tiktok.

✓ Sometimes I see some advertisements and recommendations on social media platforms like Red Notes or Tiktok.

The phrase 'I can't say some advertisement' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I see some advertisements', so the sentence is corrected accordingly.

× Additionally, I.

✓ Additionally, I sometimes discover new apps through friends' recommendations.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object, making it a sentence structure error. Completing the sentence provides clarity.

× I would definitely like reading apps because they live in a fast pass society so that many people don't have time to read traditional books.

✓ I would definitely like reading apps because we live in a fast-paced society so that many people don't have time to read traditional books.

The phrase 'live in a fast pass society' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'fast-paced'. Also, 'they' should be 'we' to refer to people in general.

× I think they made it easier for us to read anywhere at any time because they offer us a platform that has a lot of.

✓ I think they have made it easier for us to read anywhere at any time because they offer us a platform that has a lot of books.

The past tense 'made' should be present perfect 'have made' to indicate an action relevant to the present. The sentence was also incomplete and is completed for clarity.