App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to avoid repeating words and make your sentences more coherent. Also, provide specific examples of how you use the app to make your answer more detailed and natural.

Ví dụ: I often use Messenger to stay in touch with my friends, family, and classmates. For example, I receive updates about school events and chat with my parents daily through this app.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some hesitation and redundancy. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, use more precise vocabulary to describe the apps and their functions.

Ví dụ: I am usually interested in social apps like Zalo, Messenger, TikTok, and Facebook because they help me stay updated with daily news and provide entertainment through videos and posts.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Avoid filler words and explain your ideas more clearly. Also, provide specific examples of how you discover new apps.

Ví dụ: I usually find new apps when I need something specific, like watching movies for free. For instance, I discovered Netflix because I wanted to watch films online.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some hesitation and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more confidently and use linking words to explain your reasons. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to use Instagram because it is a popular social app similar to Facebook. Many people use it now, so I think it will help me connect with more friends.

× I always use messenger because I can I I use it to update new information from my friends, my parents and in the school because I have a roof student in this app.

✓ I always use Messenger because I can use it to update new information from my friends, my parents, and at school because I have a group of students in this app.

The sentence contains repeated pronouns ('I can I I') which is incorrect. Also, 'in the school' should be 'at school' to indicate location, and 'roof student' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'group of students'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I like the kind of app I like yours is the social app like Zalo messengers uh TikTok or Facebook, because uh it can it help me uh, can help me uh, update new information in umm, in the daily life and uh help me entertainment.

✓ I like social apps like Zalo, Messenger, TikTok, or Facebook because they can help me update new information in daily life and provide entertainment.

The original sentence has redundancy and awkward phrasing ('I like the kind of app I like yours is the social app'). Also, 'help me entertainment' is incorrect; it should be 'provide entertainment' or 'help me with entertainment'. The correction improves sentence structure and word choice.

× I usually uh, find out different app when I need uh, many love or I want to watch free. I usually, uh, use Netflix.

✓ I usually find different apps when I need to relax or want to watch for free. I usually use Netflix.

'Different app' should be plural 'different apps' to agree with 'different'. Also, 'many love' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'to relax'. The phrase 'watch free' is incomplete; it should be 'watch for free'. These corrections fix number agreement and clarify meaning.

× Uh, I think Instagram is an app I can use in the future because it's like Facebook, uh, it's a social app, but I think the chance, the chance now many people use Instagram, so I think I have to do that.

✓ I think Instagram is an app I can use in the future because it's like Facebook; it's a social app. But I think now many people use Instagram, so I think I have to use it too.

The phrase 'the chance, the chance now many people use Instagram' is unclear and likely a mishearing or incorrect phrasing. Replacing it with 'now many people use Instagram' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'I have to do that' is vague; 'I have to use it too' is more precise. These changes improve clarity and pronoun use.