App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repetition like "daily, daily" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I recently used Duolingo, a language learning app that helps me study daily by tracking my progress. I find it very useful because it motivates me to keep practicing every day.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition. Also, improve grammar by saying 'I am usually interested in social media apps.' Use linking words to explain why you like them more clearly.

Ví dụ: I am usually interested in social media apps like Instagram and TikTok because they offer many attractive posts that inspire me. Therefore, they help me broaden my creativity and imagination.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but needs clearer sentence structure and less repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy like 'the the' and 'which is which is'.

Ví dụ: I usually find new apps through recommendations from friends or by exploring the internet. For example, I recently downloaded WhatsApp, a popular social media app that helps me connect with people worldwide.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence fluency. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about how these apps help you.

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to use artificial intelligence apps like ChatGPT or Gemini because they offer many learning opportunities. For instance, when I ask questions, they provide detailed answers that are very helpful in my daily life.

× I recently used the language app called Duolingo, which provides us the educational language systems.

✓ I recently used the language app called Duolingo, which provides us with educational language systems.

The phrase 'provides us the educational language systems' is missing the preposition 'with' after 'provides us'. The correct form is 'provides us with'. This is a common collocation in English where 'provide' is followed by 'someone with something'.

× I think it's really useful for me to continue studying a language because it's really easy to continue daily, daily because it's tracked the daily task for me.

✓ I think it's really useful for me to continue studying a language because it's really easy to continue daily since it tracks the daily tasks for me.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect tense. 'Because it's tracked the daily task for me' should be 'since it tracks the daily tasks for me' to indicate ongoing action. Also, 'daily, daily because' is repetitive and unclear; replacing with 'daily since' improves clarity.

× I usually interested in about social media applications such as Instagram or Tiktok because it provides us many, many, uh, distract, uh, many attractive, uh, posts, uh, which is, uh, which I'm interested in so I can broaden my creativity and imagination.

✓ I am usually interested in social media applications such as Instagram or TikTok because they provide us with many attractive posts, which I am interested in so I can broaden my creativity and imagination.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I usually', which is necessary for the present tense. Also, 'interested in about' is incorrect; 'interested in' is sufficient. 'It provides' should be 'they provide' to agree with the plural subject 'applications'. The word 'distract' is incorrect here and should be removed. 'Provides us many' should be 'provide us with many' to be grammatically correct.

× Sometimes my friends recommend the new app and the the sometimes I explore an Internet to download the new application, which is which is very significantly useful for me especially.

✓ Sometimes my friends recommend new apps and sometimes I explore the Internet to download new applications, which are especially useful for me.

'The the sometimes' is a repetition error. 'An Internet' is incorrect; 'the Internet' is the correct form. 'The new app' should be plural 'new apps' to match the context. 'Which is which is very significantly useful' is redundant and awkward; simplifying to 'which are especially useful' improves clarity and correctness.

× For example, recently I downloaded the social media application called WhatsApp, which is widely used in the world to connect with people.

✓ For example, recently I downloaded the social media application called WhatsApp, which is widely used around the world to connect with people.

The phrase 'in the world' is less common than 'around the world' when describing widespread use. This is a stylistic improvement rather than a strict grammatical error.

× I want to use artificial intelligence application called ChatGPT or Gemini, which provides us a lot of opportunities to learn many things.

✓ I want to use artificial intelligence applications called ChatGPT or Gemini, which provide us with a lot of opportunities to learn many things.

'Application' should be plural 'applications' because two are mentioned. 'Provides' should be 'provide' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'provide us a lot of' should be 'provide us with a lot of' to be grammatically correct.

× For example, if I ask some question to them, uh, they answer the many different answers to me, which is really helpful for me to, for my daily life and.

✓ For example, if I ask them some questions, they give me many different answers, which is really helpful for my daily life.

'Ask some question to them' is incorrect; the correct form is 'ask them some questions'. 'They answer the many different answers to me' is awkward; 'they give me many different answers' is clearer and grammatically correct. The sentence ends abruptly and redundantly; simplifying improves clarity.