App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and accurate: correct article use, remove filler words, fix vocabulary errors, and make ideas coherent with linking words. Keep answer within 2–4 sentences: state the apps, explain purpose, and give a specific example. Pronounce names clearly and avoid unnecessary hesitations.

Ví dụ: Recently I've been using YouTube and Snapchat. I use YouTube to watch videos about IELTS band requirements and study techniques, for example channels that explain writing task 2. I also follow Snapchat accounts that share quick study tips to help me prepare more thoroughly for the test.

Gợi ý: Make the sentence grammatically correct and choose clearer vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence naming types of apps, then give a reason and a specific example. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid contradictions like "cannot using." Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: I'm usually interested in entertainment apps such as YouTube and TikTok because they help me relax after work. For example, I watch short comedy clips or relaxing music videos to unwind.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and word choice: replace awkward phrases ("personal understandments", "App Store chats") and use linking words to separate methods. Give one specific example of a review or recommendation to make it more concrete. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually discover new apps through recommendations from friends and family because they often point out useful features. I also browse the App Store and read user reviews to compare functionality and ratings before I download an app; for example, I read reviews about battery usage and privacy settings.

Gợi ý: Be more direct and eliminate redundant words ("over the next future years", "probably" twice). State the specific app types and explain why with a concrete example of a feature you'd use. Use linking words to connect ideas and stay within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: In the future I'd like to use language-learning apps that focus on speaking practice and exam preparation for tests like the TOEFL. For instance, I would use apps with pronunciation feedback, timed speaking tasks, and simulated speaking tests to improve fluency and exam technique.

× Recently I've been using a YouTube and a Snapchat.

✓ Recently I've been using YouTube and Snapchat.

Use of the indefinite article 'a' before proper nouns for app names is incorrect. App names like YouTube and Snapchat are uncountable brand names and should not take 'a'. Remove 'a' to make the sentence natural.

× I watch videos to learn about Isles band uh requirements and study techniques, and I follow Snapchat accounts that shake quick tips boss help me prepare and more thoroughly for the test.

✓ I watch videos to learn about IELTS band requirements and study techniques, and I follow Snapchat accounts that share quick tips to help me prepare more thoroughly for the test.

Multiple issues: incorrect noun 'Isles' should be 'IELTS' (proper noun), 'shake' is a wrong verb and should be 'share', and 'boss' is inappropriate; likely intended 'to'. Also 'more thoroughly' should follow 'help me prepare' with 'to'. The present simple is appropriate here for habitual actions.

× Mostly I just cannot using YouTube and Tiktok which allows me to make relaxations especially after my work day.

✓ Mostly I just use YouTube and TikTok, which allow me to relax, especially after my work day.

'Cannot using' is ungrammatical; replace with 'use'. 'Tiktok' should be 'TikTok'. The relative clause must agree in number: 'which allow' because two apps (YouTube and TikTok) are plural. 'Make relaxations' is unnatural; 'relax' is correct. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× I usually discover new apps throughout recommendations from my friends and family members as a personal understandments often highlight useful features, and I also browse App Store chats and read reviews to compare functionality and ratings before downloading.

✓ I usually discover new apps through recommendations from my friends and family, as personal recommendations often highlight useful features, and I also browse the App Store and read reviews to compare functionality and ratings before downloading.

Use 'through' not 'throughout' for means. 'Recommendations' fits better than 'understandments' (incorrect word); replace with 'personal recommendations'. 'Family members' can be shortened to 'family'. Use 'the App Store' (definite article) and 'browse the App Store' rather than 'App Store chats'. Sentence simplified for clarity and correct prepositions.

× Over the next future years, I'd like to probably use apps that can help me to prepare my speaking skills and probably prepare more deeply TOEFL exams.

✓ Over the next few years, I'd like to use apps that can help me prepare my speaking skills and prepare more thoroughly for the TOEFL exam.

'Next future years' is redundant; use 'next few years'. 'I'd like to probably use' is wordy and uncertain; 'I'd like to use' is clearer. 'Help me to prepare my speaking skills' should be 'help me prepare my speaking skills' (omit 'to'). 'Prepare more deeply TOEFL exams' is ungrammatical; use 'prepare more thoroughly for the TOEFL exam'. Use singular 'exam' or 'the TOEFL exams' depending on context; singular is more natural here.