App— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and fix sentence fragments. Add one specific reason or example to support your statement. Use linking words to make it coherent.

Ví dụ: I use WeChat and QQ every day. They help me coordinate work and study schedules, share documents, and chat with classmates. For example, my team and I use WeChat groups to assign tasks and send meeting notes, which saves time.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and relevant but could be improved with a brief specific detail and a linking word for flow. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid repeating obvious adjectives.

Ví dụ: I'm most interested in communication apps like WeChat and QQ because they make staying in touch quick and efficient. For instance, WeChat's group chats and file-sharing features are practical for both family and work. Therefore, I prefer apps that combine messaging, calls, and document sharing.

Gợi ý: Avoid sentence fragments and filler words. Combine ideas into one coherent sentence and give a specific example of how you discover an app (e.g., influencer review, ad, friend recommendation). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example.'

Ví dụ: I usually discover new apps on social media platforms such as Bilibili and TikTok because influencers often review them and targeted ads appear in my feed. For example, I downloaded a photo-editing app after watching a popular creator demonstrate its filters.

Gợi ý: Correct factual and grammatical errors, be specific about the apps and their benefits, and avoid incomplete sentences. Introduce the topic clearly, give one or two concrete benefits, and finish the thought. Don't invent incorrect names (e.g., 'Germany').

Ví dụ: In the future I'd like to use more artificial intelligence apps such as ChatGPT and AI-powered research assistants because they can summarize articles quickly and suggest relevant sources. For example, an AI assistant could reduce my research time by generating concise summaries of long papers.

× I use WeChat and QQ every day.

✓ I use WeChat and QQ every day.

No correction needed but included for completeness: the present simple tense is appropriate for habitual actions. Keep this form for daily routines.

× I rely on them very heavily both at work and study.

✓ I rely on them very heavily both at work and in my studies.

The phrase 'both at work and study' is unbalanced. Use parallel prepositional phrases: 'at work' and 'in my studies' (or 'in study' is unidiomatic). Adding 'my' clarifies possession. This fixes sentence structure and preposition usage.

× They are because they are really helpful.

✓ They are useful because they are really helpful.

Original sentence is incomplete and redundant ('They are because...'). Provide a clear main clause: 'They are useful' or remove redundancy: 'They are really helpful.' Ensure sentences have a subject and a clear predicate.

× I am very interested in communication apps such as WeChat and QQ because they are very convenient and practical in daily life.

✓ I am very interested in communication apps such as WeChat and QQ because they are very convenient and practical in daily life.

No grammatical change needed: present simple and present continuous 'am interested' correctly express a current state. Sentence is acceptable.

× I usually find out new apps on social medias such as Bilibili and Tiktok.

✓ I usually find new apps on social media such as Bilibili and TikTok.

'Find out' is awkward here; 'find' is more natural. 'Social medias' is incorrect: 'social media' is an uncountable noun. Capitalize 'TikTok'. This fixes verb choice and pluralization.

× Because, uh, they often have a many advertisements.

✓ They often have many advertisements.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' creates a sentence fragment; here the clause should attach to the previous sentence or be rephrased as a full sentence. Also remove the article 'a' before 'many advertisements' because 'many' already indicates plurality. For spoken style, filler 'uh' can be omitted in writing.

× I would like to use some artificial intelligence apps such as Germany and the ChatGPT in the future because as they reduce my searching time in the.

✓ I would like to use some artificial intelligence apps such as ChatGPT in the future because they reduce my searching time.

Several issues: 'Germany' is a country, not an app—wrong word choice. 'the ChatGPT' should be 'ChatGPT' without 'the'. The phrase 'because as' is redundant—use one conjunction ('because'). The sentence ended abruptly 'in the.' Remove the incomplete phrase. The corrected sentence fixes word choice, article use, conjunction redundancy, and completes the idea.