Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like parties?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. If I have time with my friends, I like to. I'd like to go shopping. I don't like parties. I I really don't like drinking.
Giám khảo
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
When I was a kid, I only had parties on my birthday because umm, I don't, I don't like umm, because I have, I, I don't have so many friends. I, I only have one or two good friends.
Giám khảo
Have you ever organized a party?
Thí sinh
No, compared with organizing parties, I always the I always I was always be invited. My friends was my friends are more are more enthusiastic.
Do you like parties?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复且不够连贯,建议避免重复表达,使用连接词使回答更自然流畅,同时回答应更直接。
Ví dụ: No, I don't like parties because I prefer spending time with my friends shopping. Also, I really dislike drinking, so parties are not enjoyable for me.
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有较多犹豫词和重复,建议减少口头语,使用连接词使句子更连贯,并提供更具体的细节。
Ví dụ: When I was a kid, I only had parties on my birthday because I didn't have many friends, just one or two close ones.
Have you ever organized a party?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多且表达不清晰,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用正确的时态和主谓一致。
Ví dụ: No, I have never organized a party. Usually, I am invited because my friends are more enthusiastic about organizing events.
× If I have time with my friends, I like to.
✓ If I have time with my friends, I like to go out.
句子中 'I like to' 后面缺少动词,导致句子不完整。需要补充动词以表达完整的意思。
× My friends was my friends are more are more enthusiastic.
✓ My friends are more enthusiastic.
主语是复数 'My friends',谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are',而不是单数 'was'。
× I always the I always I was always be invited.
✓ I was always invited.
句子结构混乱,重复且不符合语法规则。应简化为 'I was always invited' 以表达正确的意思。