Party— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, say "I like to stay at home reading books or watching anime" instead of "and reading books or watching anime." Also, use singular/plural forms correctly, e.g., "people" instead of "peoples." Try to make your sentences more natural and concise.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like parties because I am a quiet and shy person. I prefer staying at home reading books or watching anime, which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed. Mixing with people and dancing can be stressful for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly. For example, say "I rarely went to parties when I was a kid because I was shy and didn't have many friends. Instead, I enjoyed drawing with my family." Avoid confusing phrases like "They were her party situation."

Ví dụ: I rarely went to parties as a child because I was shy and introverted. Instead, I preferred spending time drawing with my parents and family members.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly, e.g., "parties" instead of "a party" when talking generally. Also, connect your ideas smoothly using linking words. For example, "Although I am not a party person, I often organize parties for special occasions like birthdays and anniversaries."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often organize parties, even though I am not a party person. For example, I organize birthday parties for myself, my parents, or my cousins. Last year, I had a small party with close friends and family, which I really enjoyed.

× I am a very quiet and shy person so I like to stay at home and reading books or watching anime.

✓ I am a very quiet and shy person so I like to stay at home and read books or watch anime.

After 'like to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So 'reading' and 'watching' should be corrected to 'read' and 'watch'.

× This makes me very comfortable and anxiety free as mixing up with peoples and dancing around would be so much stress for me.

✓ This makes me very comfortable and anxiety free as mixing up with people and dancing around would be so much stress for me.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the correct plural form for persons in general. 'Peoples' refers to ethnic groups, which is not the intended meaning.

× I really went to party when I was a kid because I was a shy and introverted person and I didn't have any friends, so I liked to draw with my parents and my family members.

✓ I really didn't go to parties when I was a kid because I was a shy and introverted person and I didn't have any friends, so I liked to draw with my parents and my family members.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'went to party' instead of 'didn't go to parties' to express the negative past action. Also, 'party' should be plural 'parties' when talking generally.

× They were her party situation.

✓ That was their party situation.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect here; it should be 'their' to refer to the group (parents and family members). Also, 'They were' is incorrect; 'That was' fits better to describe the situation.

× Yes, I often organize a party.

✓ Yes, I often organize parties.

When talking about habitual actions, plural form 'parties' is more appropriate than singular 'a party'.

× Though I am not a party person.

✓ Though I am not a party person.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I organize party for my birthday, my parents anniversary or my cousins birthday.

✓ I organize parties for my birthday, my parents' anniversary, or my cousins' birthdays.

'Party' should be plural 'parties' because multiple events are mentioned. Also, possessive apostrophes are needed for 'parents'' and 'cousins'' to show ownership.

× It for example I organize a birthday party for myself.

✓ For example, I organize a birthday party for myself.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words. Starting with 'For example,' and then the statement is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Last year it was with my intimate friends and family.

✓ Last year, it was with my close friends and family.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'intimate friends' is unusual; 'close friends' is more natural. Also, adding a comma after 'Last year' improves clarity.