Party— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "important party like the wedding parties or birthday parties"; instead, say "important parties like weddings or birthdays." Also, correct grammar errors like "special occasions" (plural) and use linking words to improve flow.

Ví dụ: I don't usually enjoy parties, but I like attending important ones like weddings or birthday celebrations because I want to share those special moments with others.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs grammatical corrections and clearer structure. Use past tense consistently and correct articles and plurals. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a topic sentence, then add details about who attended and how often.

Ví dụ: I didn't have many parties when I was a kid. Usually, I only had birthday parties at home with my family, relatives, and a few friends. Overall, I think I had about four or five birthday parties.

Gợi ý: Your answer should use past tense consistently and avoid filler words like "umm." Also, improve sentence structure and clarity by linking ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the event and your role.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have organized a party once. When I was 12 years old, I planned and managed a New Year's party at my school, where I was responsible for running the show.

× Actually, I do not like parties but I can enjoy the important party like the wedding parties or birthday parties because I want to celebrate this special occasions for them.

✓ Actually, I do not like parties but I can enjoy important parties like wedding parties or birthday parties because I want to celebrate these special occasions for them.

The phrase 'the important party' is incorrect because 'party' should be plural to match 'wedding parties or birthday parties'. Also, 'this special occasions' is incorrect because 'occasions' is plural and should be preceded by 'these' instead of 'this'. The quantifiers 'important' and 'these' must agree in number with the nouns they modify.

× I didn't have party mush when I were a kid.

✓ I didn't have many parties when I was a kid.

The noun 'party' should be plural 'parties' because it refers to multiple events. Also, 'mush' is a misspelling of 'much'. Since 'parties' is countable, 'many' is the correct quantifier. Additionally, 'were' should be 'was' to agree with the singular subject 'I' in past tense.

× I didn't have party mush when I were a kid.

✓ I didn't have many parties when I was a kid.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I' in past tense; it should be 'was'. This is a past tense issue involving subject-verb agreement.

× I just have a birthday party at my home.

✓ I just had a birthday party at my home.

Although 'a birthday party' is singular and correct, the verb tense should be past tense 'had' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when you were a kid'.

× This is my family and my relatives, a few friends to join our party birthday and that is I just have like an four or five times.

✓ This included my family, my relatives, and a few friends who joined our birthday party, and I had it about four or five times.

The sentence has pronoun and structural issues. 'This is' should be 'This included' to refer to past events. 'To join' should be 'who joined' to correctly refer to people. 'Our party birthday' is incorrect word order; it should be 'birthday party'. 'That is I just have like an four or five times' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I had it about four or five times'. The pronouns and sentence structure need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes I do. I just have one opportunity to organize a party, a new year, parties at school.

✓ Yes, I have. I had one opportunity to organize a New Year's party at school.

The phrase 'Yes I do' is inappropriate as a response to 'Have you ever organized a party?'; 'Yes, I have' is correct. Also, 'I just have one opportunity' should be past tense 'I had one opportunity' to match the past event. 'A new year, parties' is incorrect; it should be 'a New Year's party' (singular). Modal verb usage and tense need correction.

× I think I was 12 years old and I have to plan umm, to run the show in the party.

✓ I think I was 12 years old and I had to plan, umm, to run the show at the party.

The verb 'have to' should be in past tense 'had to' to match the past time frame. Also, 'in the party' should be 'at the party' (preposition correction). The past tense issue is the main error here.