Party— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid grammatical errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement, tense, articles) and informal filler words. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "enjoyable" not "enjoyful").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy parties. For example, I love birthday parties because they are a chance to exchange gifts and celebrate with close friends, and I also enjoy dance parties for the music and food.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, past-focused topic sentence about frequency, then add a reason or brief comparison using linking words. Correct past-tense forms and avoid repetition. Be specific about frequency (e.g., "almost never" or "only for birthdays").

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I almost never had parties; my parents did not organize them. Only on my birthday did we have a small celebration, so parties were rare for me growing up.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear statement about whether you have organized parties, then explain frequency and context with coherent linking words. Use correct time expressions ("on holidays," "at the end of the week") and avoid repetition. Be specific about what you organize and with whom.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have organized parties. For instance, during holidays I often organize get-togethers with my friends, usually at the end of the week, where we arrange music, snacks, and games.

× Yes, of course I like parties and I enjoy when I go to the parties.

✓ Yes, of course I like parties and I enjoy going to parties.

The phrase 'I enjoy when I go to the parties' uses an incorrect clause after 'enjoy'. After 'enjoy' use a noun, gerund, or noun phrase rather than a full clause with 'when'. Changing to 'enjoy going to parties' uses the gerund 'going' correctly and sounds natural. Suggestion: Use 'enjoy' + gerund (enjoy doing something).

× I Love Actually the birthday parties because I gave a gift or take a gift from my friend and it's very enjoyful.

✓ I actually love birthday parties because I give or receive gifts from my friends and they are very enjoyable.

Multiple errors: capitalization ('Love' should be lowercase), word order ('Actually' should come before 'love' or after subject), verb tenses and forms ('gave' and 'take' mix past and base forms; should be present 'give' and 'receive'), plural agreement ('friend' -> 'friends'), and use of 'enjoyful' which is uncommon for events; 'enjoyable' is correct. The main listed problem type is incorrect adjective/adverb choice and placement. Suggestion: maintain consistent present tense when speaking generally (I love, I give/receive), use correct adjective 'enjoyable'.

× Or also dance parties is very good and enjoy food.

✓ Also, dance parties are very good and have enjoyable food.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement and structure problems. 'Dance parties' is plural so use 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement relates to type 27 but here fixed under sentence structure). 'Enjoy food' is unclear; events don't 'enjoy' — people enjoy food or food is enjoyable. Revised to 'have enjoyable food' or 'where the food is enjoyable'. Suggestion: match plural subject with plural verb and use correct verb for experiencing food. Alternatively: 'Also, dance parties are very good and the food is enjoyable.'

× Actually when I was a kid I rarely have a party and I don't know why my parents didn't hold for me a party.

✓ Actually, when I was a kid I rarely had a party and I don't know why my parents didn't hold a party for me.

The sentence mixes past ('when I was a kid') with present tense 'have'. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Also word order with 'hold for me a party' is incorrect in English; correct order is 'hold a party for me'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use natural verb-object order.

× But now I usually have a party and when I was child I only have a party when I have I had my birthday party.

✓ But now I usually have parties, and when I was a child I only had a party for my birthday.

This sentence mixes present and past tenses and has repetition and missing article 'a child'. Use plural 'parties' if referring to habitual events now. For the past clause, use past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child'. Remove redundant words and place article 'a'. Suggestion: separate present habitual actions from past habitual actions and use correct articles.

× Yes.

✓ Yes.

No correction needed; single-word answer is fine in context.

× Yes, actually I sometimes organize a party and usually every week at in the holiday, the end of the weeks I organize the party with my friends and we always in holidays we we have a party and.

✓ Yes, actually I sometimes organize parties, usually on holidays or at the end of the week; I organize parties with my friends and we always have parties during holidays.

Original sentence has many tense, preposition, article, plurality and repetition errors. Use 'organize parties' for habitual plural events. Prepositions: 'on holidays' or 'at the end of the week' (not 'at in the holiday' or 'end of the weeks'). Remove duplicated words 'we we' and the trailing 'and'. Keep present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: plan sentences into shorter clauses, use correct prepositions ('on holidays', 'at the end of the week'), plural nouns for repeated events, and avoid repetition.