Traffic— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为简单，缺少具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议在回答中加入更多具体信息，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood because I live in a bustling city. These crosswalks help pedestrians cross busy streets safely, especially during rush hours.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和断句不连贯的问题，建议避免句子碎片，使用连接词使句子完整且逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see better traffic management in my area because traffic congestion is a serious problem, especially during peak hours when many people commute to work.

× Because the traffic congestion is a serious problem, especially during. Peak hours.

✓ Because the traffic congestion is a serious problem, especially during peak hours.

句子中“during.”后面不应有句号，导致句子结构不完整。应将句号去掉，使句子连贯完整。