Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are several crosswalks around the well. I live especially there are several schools nearby and after school time there are always is crosswalk guarding standing there to protect the students and the child to cross the crosswalks.
Giám khảo
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
Thí sinh
There are not the much a parking places in my area and after school and after works there are many cars. Looking for a parking places to park around my area is a time consuming.
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确,句子结构混乱,影响理解。建议简化句子结构,注意时态和单复数,避免重复和冗余。可以用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several crosswalks around my neighborhood. Since there are many schools nearby, crossing guards usually help children cross safely after school hours.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够流畅。建议注意冠词和名词复数形式,使用连接词使句子更连贯,并具体说明问题和影响。
Ví dụ: I would like to have more parking spaces in my area because after school and work, many cars make it difficult to find a spot, which wastes a lot of time.
× Yes, there are several crosswalks around the well.
✓ Yes, there are several crosswalks around the area.
这里的 'well' 应该是 'area' 或类似词,且 'crosswalks' 是复数,符合语法。原句中 'well' 用词不当,需改为合适的名词。
× after school time there are always is crosswalk guarding standing there to protect the students and the child to cross the crosswalks.
✓ after school time there is always a crosswalk guard standing there to protect the students and the children crossing the crosswalks.
'crosswalk guarding' 应为 'crosswalk guard',且 'is' 和 'always' 位置错误,'child' 应为复数 'children',因为指多个学生。
× There are not the much a parking places in my area
✓ There are not many parking places in my area
'parking places' 是复数,前面应使用 'many' 而非 'much',且 'a' 不应出现在复数名词前。
× Looking for a parking places to park around my area is a time consuming.
✓ Looking for parking places to park around my area is time-consuming.
'a parking places' 中 'a' 不应与复数名词连用,且 'time consuming' 应用连字符 'time-consuming' 作形容词。