Traffic— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Use 'crosswalks' instead of 'crossovers' and correct verb tenses. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live because it is an industrial area. Many pedestrians use them to go to work in the morning and return in the evening. Therefore, having numerous crosswalks is important to ensure their safety.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your thoughts and use proper sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' correctly to explain your reasons. Also, avoid repetition and be specific about the problem and your suggestion.

Ví dụ: I would like to change the signal timings at the main road junctions because currently, some lanes have longer green lights while others have very short times. This causes heavy traffic congestion on certain lanes, so adjusting the timings would improve traffic flow.

× Yes, there are many crossovers around the place where I am living.

✓ Yes, there are many crosswalks around the place where I live.

The word 'crossovers' is incorrect in this context; the correct term is 'crosswalks' which refers to pedestrian crossings. Also, 'I am living' is less natural here; 'I live' is preferred for habitual actions or permanent situations.

× As it is a industrial area, many of pedestrian often used to go to work on the morning times and returning in the Evening Times.

✓ As it is an industrial area, many pedestrians often go to work in the morning and return in the evening.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound like 'industrial'. 'Many of pedestrian' is incorrect; it should be 'many pedestrians'. 'Used to' is unnecessary here; simple present tense 'often go' is correct for habitual actions. 'On the morning times' and 'in the Evening Times' are incorrect prepositional phrases; correct forms are 'in the morning' and 'in the evening'.

× So it is very important to keep more number of crossovers in the area in order to save.

✓ So it is very important to have more crosswalks in the area in order to ensure safety.

'More number of crossovers' is incorrect; 'more crosswalks' is the correct quantifier usage. Also, 'in order to save' is incomplete; it should specify what to save, so 'in order to ensure safety' is clearer.

× So I want to change the signal timings of the junctions in the main road.

✓ I want to change the signal timings of the junctions on the main road.

Starting a sentence with 'So' here is unnecessary and informal. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to roads.

× Because some signal timings are fixed according to the more number of traffics of the one line and another line may have the less timings to go due to this one one line is facing a lot of.

✓ Because some signal timings are fixed according to the higher traffic volume on one lane, and another lane may have less time to go; due to this, one lane faces a lot of congestion.

'More number of traffics' is incorrect; 'higher traffic volume' is appropriate. 'One line' should be 'one lane'. 'Less timings to go' should be 'less time to go'. The sentence was incomplete and unclear; it has been restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.