Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
Thí sinh
I think we don't have many close work because my my hometown is too many tropics and the car so there has many penetrate bridge.
Giám khảo
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
Thí sinh
I I want to I require to make him that bicycle mode because my my the world which front of my house is so dangerous I need it.
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 質問に対して直接的な答えが不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。より明確に「交差点が多いかどうか」を答え、理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"No, there are not many crosswalks because my hometown has many overpasses due to heavy traffic."のように答えると良いです。
Ví dụ: No, there are not many crosswalks in my hometown because there are many overpasses to help cars pass safely.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 答えが不明瞭で、伝えたい内容がはっきりしません。交通の問題点と改善したいことを簡潔に述べ、理由を付け加える練習をしましょう。例えば、"I would like to have a bicycle lane in front of my house because the road is very dangerous."のように答えると良いです。
Ví dụ: I would like to have a bicycle lane in front of my house because the road is very dangerous for cyclists.
× I think we don't have many close work because my my hometown is too many tropics and the car so there has many penetrate bridge.
✓ I think we don't have many crosswalks because my hometown has too many trees and cars, so there are many pedestrian bridges.
The word 'work' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'crosswalks', which is plural. Also, 'there has many penetrate bridge' is incorrect; it should be 'there are many pedestrian bridges' to match plural subject and correct vocabulary.
× I think we don't have many close work because my my hometown is too many tropics and the car so there has many penetrate bridge.
✓ I think we don't have many crosswalks because my hometown has too many trees and cars, so there are many pedestrian bridges.
The phrase 'too many tropics and the car' is incorrect; it should be 'too many trees and cars' to make sense and use correct prepositions and nouns.
× I think we don't have many close work because my my hometown is too many tropics and the car so there has many penetrate bridge.
✓ I think we don't have many crosswalks because my hometown has too many trees and cars, so there are many pedestrian bridges.
The phrase 'there has many penetrate bridge' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'there are many pedestrian bridges' because 'there are' is used for plural subjects.
× I I want to I require to make him that bicycle mode because my my the world which front of my house is so dangerous I need it.
✓ I want to request making a bicycle lane because the road in front of my house is very dangerous, and I need it.
The phrase 'I require to make him that bicycle mode' is incorrect modal verb usage. 'Require to make' is not correct; 'want to request' or 'would like to have' is appropriate. Also, 'bicycle mode' should be 'bicycle lane' or 'bicycle path'.
× I I want to I require to make him that bicycle mode because my my the world which front of my house is so dangerous I need it.
✓ I want to request making a bicycle lane because the road in front of my house is very dangerous, and I need it.
The pronoun 'him' is incorrectly used here; it should be omitted or replaced with the correct noun phrase. Also, 'the world which front of my house' is incorrect; it should be 'the road in front of my house'.