Traffic— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to avoid redundancy and add a linking phrase to make your response more coherent. For example, instead of repeating 'well' twice, you could say 'The streets are thoughtfully designed to accommodate both pedestrians and cars.'

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many well-organized crosswalks in my neighborhood. Moreover, the streets are thoughtfully designed to accommodate both pedestrians and cars, making it safe and convenient for everyone.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. To improve, try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and avoid repetition. Also, be specific about your suggestions and explain why they would help.

Ví dụ: I would like to improve the traffic situation in my area, especially during rush hours. For instance, building a bridge and widening the streets could help reduce congestion by allowing more vehicles to pass through smoothly.

× During the rush hours.

✓ During the rush hours,

The sentence 'During the rush hours.' is a sentence fragment because it lacks a main verb and does not form a complete thought. It should be connected to the previous or following sentence with a comma or rephrased to form a complete sentence.

× So the better solution from I think is to build a bridge and more and to wind up to make the streets wider.

✓ So the better solution, I think, is to build a bridge and more, and to widen the streets.

The phrase 'from I think' is incorrect; it should be 'I think' set off by commas. Also, 'to wind up to make the streets wider' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'widen' meaning to make wider. The sentence needs proper punctuation and word choice for clarity.