Traffic— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや語彙の誤用が見られます。例えば、「course works」は「crosswalks」の誤りと思われます。また、説明がやや不明瞭で、より具体的な内容や論理的なつながりを持たせる必要があります。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることを心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several crosswalks near my home. However, some of them are quite dangerous because the crossing time is only 7 or 8 seconds, which is too short for elderly people to cross safely.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に対して直接的で内容も理解できますが、表現がやや単調で、接続詞や具体的な理由付けをもう少し工夫すると良いでしょう。また、「it is very annoying for me」という表現は少しカジュアルすぎるため、より適切な語彙を使うことをおすすめします。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think the local government should widen the roads because there are frequent traffic jams, especially in the mornings. This causes significant delays and makes commuting very frustrating for residents like me.

× Yes, there are three or course works near my home.

✓ Yes, there are three or four crosswalks near my home.

The word 'course works' is incorrect and should be 'crosswalks' to match the context. Also, 'or' is likely a typo for 'or four'. This is a singular/plural and word choice issue.

× It seems that some of them are very dangerous because it takes 7 or 8 seconds to finish working.

✓ It seems that some of them are very dangerous because it takes 7 or 8 seconds to cross.

The phrase 'to finish working' is incorrect in this context. The correct phrase is 'to cross' when referring to crosswalks. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verb phrases.

× It is very short for elderly people.

✓ It is very short for elderly people to cross.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'to cross' clarifies what is short. This is an issue with adjective/adverb usage and sentence completeness.

× Yes, it seems that the local government should make the road much wider than right now because there are many traffic jams, especially in the morning, and it is very annoying for me.

✓ Yes, it seems that the local government should make the road much wider than it is right now because there are many traffic jams, especially in the morning, and it is very annoying for me.

The phrase 'wider than right now' is incomplete. Adding 'it is' makes the comparison clear. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure.