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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?

Thí sinh

I don't think so because the place that I have lived in, in Macau, especially here, is only a minor place that is only a special administrative of China. So I don't think so. There's a lot of crosswalks around my home and also in here people are more using vehicle.

Giám khảo

Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?

Thí sinh

Of course, due to the problem of traffic congestion, I would like to give some advice for the government, like improve the facility like traffic signals, because the light of the signal is simply not fired for the car because it's always struck, stuck in there.

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Part 1

Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够简洁且有重复,表达不够自然,且句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: No, there are not many crosswalks around where I live in Macau. Most people prefer to use vehicles, so pedestrian crossings are limited.

Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰,语法和用词有误,建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构,并且用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the government to improve the traffic signals because they often malfunction, which causes traffic jams in my area.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× There's a lot of crosswalks around my home and also in here people are more using vehicle.

There are a lot of crosswalks around my home and also here people use vehicles more.

这里的主语是复数(crosswalks),所以谓语动词应该用复数形式“are”,而不是“is”。另外,“vehicle”应使用复数形式“vehicles”,因为指的是多辆车。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× the place that I have lived in, in Macau, especially here, is only a minor place that is only a special administrative of China.

the place where I have lived, in Macau, especially here, is only a minor place that is a special administrative region of China.

“the place that I have lived in”中“in”位置不当,改为“the place where I have lived”更自然。并且“special administrative”后缺少名词,应补充“region”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× the light of the signal is simply not fired for the car because it's always struck, stuck in there.

the traffic signal light is simply not suitable for cars because they are always stuck there.

“fired”用法错误,应使用“suitable”表示“合适”。“struck”应为“stuck”,表示“卡住”。“in there”多余,简化为“there”更自然。

Sentence structure errors

× I would like to give some advice for the government, like improve the facility like traffic signals,

I would like to give some advice to the government, such as improving facilities like traffic signals,

“give advice for”应为“give advice to”,“like improve”结构不正确,应改为“such as improving”,使句子结构更完整。

Present tense issue

× people are more using vehicle.

people use vehicles more.

“are more using”结构不自然,改为一般现在时“use vehicles more”更符合习惯表达。

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