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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are a lot of coursework near my flat. I usually take a walk to relax and enjoy the weather on the street. I think it's really convenient live near to crosswalks.

Giám khảo

Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?

Thí sinh

The traffic near my flat is always get adjusted because there are too many cars and bikes. I would like to see few vehicles so that it's easier to get around and have fun.

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Part 1

Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误("coursework"应为"crosswalks"),影响表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意单词拼写和用词准确,避免语法错误,如"live near to crosswalks"应为"live near crosswalks"。回答内容较简单,可以增加具体细节,使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my flat. I often use them when I go for a walk to enjoy the fresh air. Living close to crosswalks is very convenient because it makes crossing the street safer and easier.

Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如"is always get adjusted"应为"is always congested"或类似表达。表达不够清晰,建议使用更准确的词汇描述交通状况,并提供具体的改进建议。回答内容较少,建议增加细节和原因,使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: The traffic near my flat is often very congested because of the large number of cars and bikes. I would like to see fewer vehicles on the road so that it becomes easier and safer to get around, which would also make the area more enjoyable for residents.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, there are a lot of coursework near my flat.

Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks near my flat.

“coursework”是不可数名词,表示“课程作业”,这里应使用复数名词“crosswalks”(人行横道)来符合句意。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think it's really convenient live near to crosswalks.

I think it's really convenient to live near crosswalks.

动词“live”前缺少不定式“to”,且“near”后不需要介词“to”,正确表达应为“to live near crosswalks”。

Present tense issue

× The traffic near my flat is always get adjusted because there are too many cars and bikes.

The traffic near my flat is always getting adjusted because there are too many cars and bikes.

“is always get adjusted”结构错误,应使用现在进行时“is always getting adjusted”表示持续发生的动作。

Singular and plural issue

× I would like to see few vehicles so that it's easier to get around and have fun.

I would like to see fewer vehicles so that it's easier to get around and have fun.

“few”用于可数名词时表示“几乎没有”,应使用比较级“fewer”表示“更少的车辆”,符合句意。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FunMerriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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