Traffic— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 길어져서 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 'divers'는 'diverse'로 수정해야 하며, 'there is many highways'는 'there are many highways'로 고쳐야 합니다. 또한, 답변이 중복되고 불필요한 부분이 있으니 핵심 내용 위주로 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: There are four crosswalks near my home. Since I live in a diverse city with many highways, crosswalks are quite common in my area.

Gợi ý: 문장이 다소 어색하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'cut off traffic lanes to fewer lanes' 대신 'reduce the number of traffic lanes'라고 표현하는 것이 자연스럽습니다. 또한, 'so that the quality of life people living around improve'는 'so that the quality of life for local residents can improve'로 수정해야 합니다. 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 다듬는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: I would like the city to reduce the number of traffic lanes near my home so that the quality of life for local residents can improve.

× There are 4 crosswalks just nearby my place and since I'm living in a city where divers and multicultural atmosphere exist there usually I can see crosswalks often because there is many highways and.

✓ There are 4 crosswalks just nearby my place and since I'm living in a city where diverse and multicultural atmospheres exist, I can usually see crosswalks often because there are many highways.

The word 'divers' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'diverse'. 'Atmosphere' should be plural 'atmospheres' to match the plural subject. 'There is many highways' is incorrect because 'highways' is plural, so it should be 'there are many highways'. These are singular and plural agreement errors.

× One thing that I want the city to change about the traffic near my place is to cut off traffic lanes to fewer lanes so that the quality of life people living around improve.

✓ One thing that I want the city to change about the traffic near my place is to reduce the number of traffic lanes so that the quality of life for people living around improves.

The phrase 'cut off traffic lanes to fewer lanes' is awkward and incorrect; 'reduce the number of traffic lanes' is better. Also, 'people living around improve' lacks a subject-verb agreement; it should be 'the quality of life for people living around improves' because 'quality of life' is singular and requires a singular verb 'improves'. These are singular and plural agreement errors.