Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
Thí sinh
No, there's no crosswalks in the place that I live in because we're in a hot city, so there's not much. People walk. They usually use their car to get to their jobs or.
Giám khảo
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are a lot of things I want to change about the traffic, but I think there's no way because the city is small and the people is are are the people. Sorry, the people are increased. So I don't think so there is anyway.
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل لتكون أكثر وضوحًا وطبيعية، وتجنب التكرار واستخدام كلمات ربط لتسلسل الأفكار بشكل أفضل.
Ví dụ: No, there aren't many crosswalks where I live because it's a hot city. Most people prefer to use their cars to commute to work rather than walking.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: حاول تنظيم أفكارك بشكل أوضح واستخدم جمل كاملة مع ربط الأفكار بكلمات مناسبة لتجنب التكرار والارتباك في الكلام.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic situation because the number of people has increased, but since the city is small, it seems difficult to find a solution.
× No, there's no crosswalks in the place that I live in because we're in a hot city, so there's not much.
✓ No, there are no crosswalks in the place that I live in because we're in a hot city, so there aren't many.
The phrase 'there's no crosswalks' is incorrect because 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is', which is singular, but 'crosswalks' is plural. The correct form is 'there are no crosswalks'. Similarly, 'there's not much' should be 'there aren't many' to agree with the plural noun 'crosswalks'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× People walk. They usually use their car to get to their jobs or.
✓ People walk. They usually use their cars to get to their jobs.
The phrase 'their car' is incorrect because 'people' is plural, so the possessive pronoun 'their' should refer to a plural noun. Therefore, 'car' should be pluralized to 'cars'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× Yes, there are a lot of things I want to change about the traffic, but I think there's no way because the city is small and the people is are are the people.
✓ Yes, there are a lot of things I want to change about the traffic, but I think there's no way because the city is small and the people are increasing.
The phrase 'the people is are are the people' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The correct verb to agree with the plural noun 'people' is 'are'. Also, 'are increasing' is a better expression to indicate growth. This is a singular and plural agreement issue and sentence structure issue.
× Sorry, the people are increased. So I don't think so there is anyway.
✓ Sorry, the population is increasing. So I don't think there is any way.
The phrase 'the people are increased' is incorrect because 'people' is not typically used with 'increased' in passive form. 'Population is increasing' is more natural. Also, 'anyway' should be 'any way' in this context. The sentence 'I don't think so there is anyway' is awkward and ungrammatical; it should be 'I don't think there is any way'. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue.