Traffic— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details using linking words. For example, clarify the location and use correct terms like 'crosswalks' instead of 'cross paths'. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live in Banasur, Kathmandu. For example, near the Parliament building, which is a well-known landmark, there are several traffic lights and crosswalks because it is a very busy area throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Please respond directly to the question, then explain your ideas clearly with specific details and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like 'extra winding the world'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic light timings in my area to make traffic flow smoother. Currently, the lights change too quickly, causing congestion during peak hours.

× It is one of the busiest street over here on the Parliament building is just the benchmark of this location.

✓ It is one of the busiest streets over here, and the Parliament building is just the benchmark of this location.

The phrase 'one of the busiest street' is incorrect because 'one of the' requires a plural noun, so 'street' should be 'streets'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs to be split or connected properly with a conjunction like 'and'.

× There are lots of traffic light and cross paths over this conjunction and it is very busy around the day.

✓ There are lots of traffic lights and crosswalks at this junction, and it is very busy throughout the day.

The nouns 'traffic light' and 'cross paths' should be pluralized to 'traffic lights' and 'crosswalks' to agree with 'lots of'. Also, 'conjunction' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'junction'. 'Around the day' is better expressed as 'throughout the day'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, there are lots of problem related to traffic in my area.

✓ Yes, there are lots of problems related to traffic in my area.

'Lots of' requires a plural noun, so 'problem' should be 'problems' to match the quantifier.

× The timing of the alternate light traffic light has to be modified and make traffic friendly.

✓ The timing of the alternate traffic lights has to be modified to make traffic flow better.

The phrase 'and make traffic friendly' is grammatically incorrect because it lacks a subject and proper verb form. Using 'to make' clarifies the purpose. Also, 'alternate light traffic light' is awkward; 'alternate traffic lights' is clearer.

× On the other hand, we need to go through extra winding the world.

✓ On the other hand, we need to take extra winding routes.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Go through extra winding the world' does not make sense. Rephrasing to 'take extra winding routes' clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.