Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
Thí sinh
No, my hometown has a few crosswalks, especially around my house because most people live in my hometown is used for their car.
Giám khảo
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
Thí sinh
I want to create bicycle ran in the part of the road in my hometown because I usually ride on bicycle to get somewhere.
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 文法の誤りを修正し、より自然な表現を使うことが重要です。また、理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。
Ví dụ: No, there are only a few crosswalks in my hometown, especially near my house, because most people prefer to use cars for transportation.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 語彙の選択と文法を改善し、より具体的な理由や効果を加えることで、回答を豊かにしましょう。
Ví dụ: I would like to create dedicated bicycle lanes on some roads in my hometown because I often ride my bike to get around, and this would make cycling safer and more convenient.
× No, my hometown has a few crosswalks, especially around my house because most people live in my hometown is used for their car.
✓ No, my hometown has few crosswalks, especially around my house because most people in my hometown use cars.
The phrase 'has a few crosswalks' suggests there are some crosswalks, but the context implies scarcity, so 'has few crosswalks' is more appropriate. Also, 'most people live in my hometown is used for their car' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'most people in my hometown use cars' to correctly express that people use cars for transportation. This corrects singular/plural and sentence structure issues.
× I want to create bicycle ran in the part of the road in my hometown because I usually ride on bicycle to get somewhere.
✓ I want to create a bicycle lane on part of the road in my hometown because I usually ride a bicycle to get somewhere.
The phrase 'bicycle ran' is incorrect; the correct term is 'bicycle lane'. Also, 'in the part of the road' should be 'on part of the road' to indicate location on the road surface. Additionally, 'ride on bicycle' should be 'ride a bicycle' as 'ride' is used with the article 'a' for singular countable nouns. These corrections fix preposition and article usage errors.