Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains unnecessary phrases like "Who? Who doesn't like shopping?" which makes it less natural. Try to give a direct response with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundant or confusing expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because I like buying new things that interest me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and redundancy, such as repeating "obviously" and incomplete sentences. Use linking words properly to connect your ideas and make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to buy affordable products without compromising on quality.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear due to incorrect word usage like "sriti" and awkward phrasing. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and structure your sentences clearly. Also, provide specific reasons to support your answer using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes it is difficult to make choices because there are many different items available, which can be confusing.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions like "all over this better" and "really use of." Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and provide specific reasons using linking words to make your answer more effective.

Ví dụ: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because sometimes affordable items have good quality, while expensive ones may not be worth the price.

× Yes, I love shopping like.

✓ Yes, I love shopping.

The word 'like' is incorrectly used at the end of the sentence. It is unnecessary and makes the sentence grammatically incorrect. Simply saying 'Yes, I love shopping.' is correct and clear.

× I love shopping be 'cause I love to buy new things.

✓ I love shopping because I love to buy new things.

The phrase 'be 'cause' is an incorrect informal contraction. The correct conjunction is 'because' which properly connects the two clauses.

× Yes, obviously I compare prices when I shop becaused.

✓ Yes, obviously I compare prices when I shop because.

The word 'becaused' is not a correct form. The correct conjunction is 'because' to explain the reason.

× Obviously I want to buy. Cheap products but with good quality, so I prefer to compare prices whenever I shop.

✓ Obviously, I want to buy cheap products but with good quality, so I prefer to compare prices whenever I shop.

The sentence is fragmented incorrectly with a period after 'buy'. It should be one continuous sentence. Also, 'Cheap' should not be capitalized mid-sentence.

× Yes, sometimes it may be difficult for me to make choices for shopping like because of sriti of items that I see.

✓ Yes, sometimes it may be difficult for me to make choices when shopping because of the variety of items that I see.

The phrase 'for shopping like' is incorrect; 'when shopping' is appropriate. 'Sriti' is a misspelling of 'variety'. Also, 'because of' should be followed by a noun phrase, so 'the variety of items' is correct.

× I don't believe that expensive products all over this better than cheap ones becauses.

✓ I don't believe that expensive products are always better than cheap ones because.

The phrase 'all over this' is incorrect and should be 'are always'. Also, 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct word is 'because'.

× Sometimes cheap products have high quality and expensive products are low are of low quality and I feel like that spending so much money on expensive products are really use of.

✓ Sometimes cheap products have high quality and expensive products are of low quality, and I feel that spending so much money on expensive products is really a waste.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'are low are of low quality' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'are of low quality'. 'I feel like that' should be 'I feel that'. 'are really use of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'is really a waste'. Subject-verb agreement is corrected with 'spending... is'.