Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like shopping?
Thí sinh
Wow yes I do. I really love shopping. I shopping when I have free time when I have realized time an I often go to subway with my friend and maybe I spend all of my time go to shop on the weekends.
Giám khảo
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Thí sinh
No I don't. I don't compare price when I stop because in my opinion hired fries good can bring to me. Well experience an I can use them longer than cheaper goods.
Giám khảo
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Thí sinh
No it isn't. I don't feel difficult to make choice when I shop because in my opinions Hired Pride Goose can bring to me while experience and I can use them longer than cheaper. Prize goods.
Giám khảo
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I think expensive product or expensive good all way better than cheaper products because expensive product can bring teamey very good experience and I can use them longer than are cheaper good.
Do you like shopping?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời trở nên mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy shopping. I usually go shopping during my free time, especially on weekends, often with my friends. It's a great way to relax and spend time together.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời làm rõ ý tưởng của mình. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để giải thích lý do tại sao bạn không so sánh giá cả.
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't compare prices because I believe that higher-priced products often offer better quality and last longer than cheaper ones.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.
Ví dụ: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I prefer high-quality products that provide a better experience and last longer than cheaper ones.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng từ để câu trả lời trở nên chính xác và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy giải thích rõ ràng hơn về quan điểm của bạn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe that expensive products are usually better than cheaper ones because they often provide a better experience and tend to be more durable.
× I shopping when I have free time when I have realized time an I often go to subway with my friend and maybe I spend all of my time go to shop on the weekends.
✓ I go shopping when I have free time and I often go to the subway with my friend and maybe I spend all of my time going shopping on the weekends.
The verb 'shopping' needs an auxiliary verb 'go' to form the correct expression 'go shopping'. Also, 'go to subway' should be 'go to the subway' because 'subway' is a specific place requiring the definite article 'the'. 'Spend all of my time go to shop' is incorrect; it should be 'spend all of my time going shopping' because after 'spend time', the verb should be in the -ing form.
× I often go to subway with my friend and maybe I spend all of my time go to shop on the weekends.
✓ I often go to the subway with my friend and maybe I spend all of my time going shopping on the weekends.
The phrase 'go to subway' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'subway'. Also, 'go to shop' is incorrect; it should be 'going shopping' because after 'spend time', the verb should be in the gerund form.
× No I don't. I don't compare price when I stop because in my opinion hired fries good can bring to me.
✓ No, I don't. I don't compare prices when I shop because in my opinion higher priced goods can bring me benefits.
The word 'price' should be plural 'prices' because it refers to multiple items. 'Stop' is a typo and should be 'shop'. 'Hired fries good' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'higher priced goods'. Also, 'bring to me' is awkward; 'bring me benefits' is clearer.
× No I don't. I don't compare price when I stop because in my opinion hired fries good can bring to me.
✓ No, I don't. I don't compare prices when I shop because in my opinion higher priced goods can bring me benefits.
The phrase 'bring to me' is incorrect; the verb 'bring' is usually followed directly by the indirect object without 'to' when the indirect object comes immediately after the verb.
× Well experience an I can use them longer than cheaper goods.
✓ They provide a good experience and I can use them longer than cheaper goods.
'Well experience an' is not a correct phrase. It should be 'They provide a good experience'. Also, the sentence needs a subject and verb to be complete.
× No it isn't. I don't feel difficult to make choice when I shop because in my opinions Hired Pride Goose can bring to me while experience and I can use them longer than cheaper. Prize goods.
✓ No, it isn't. I don't find it difficult to make choices when I shop because in my opinion higher priced goods can bring me a better experience and I can use them longer than cheaper prize goods.
'Make choice' should be 'make choices' to match plural form. 'In my opinions' should be singular 'in my opinion'. 'Hired Pride Goose' is likely 'higher priced goods'. 'While experience' is incorrect; it should be 'a better experience'. 'Prize goods' is likely a typo for 'priced goods'.
× Hired Pride Goose can bring to me while experience and I can use them longer than cheaper. Prize goods.
✓ Higher priced goods can bring me a better experience and I can use them longer than cheaper priced goods.
'Bring to me' is incorrect; 'bring me' is correct. 'While experience' is incorrect; it should be 'a better experience'. 'Prize goods' should be 'priced goods'.
× Yes I do. I think expensive product or expensive good all way better than cheaper products because expensive product can bring teamey very good experience and I can use them longer than are cheaper good.
✓ Yes, I do. I think expensive products are always better than cheaper products because expensive products can bring me a very good experience and I can use them longer than cheaper goods.
'Product' and 'good' should be plural 'products' and 'goods' to match the context. 'All way' should be 'always'. 'Teamey' is likely a typo for 'me'. 'Are cheaper good' is incorrect; it should be 'cheaper goods'.