Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be improved by correcting grammar (e.g., 'one of the activities'), avoiding filler words like 'Oh', and making the sentences more concise and coherent. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relax and unwind after a busy day. Moreover, it allows me to socialize and spend quality time with my friends. Most of the time, I go window shopping just for fun, especially to look for stationery items.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid sentence fragments and unclear phrases like 'award the unnecessary pouches'. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain reasons clearly. Also, correct grammar errors such as 'one of the habit' to 'one of the habits'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often compare prices while shopping because it is a habit I learned from my parents. This helps me buy only necessary items and avoid unnecessary purchases, which allows me to stick to my budget. Moreover, it helps me manage my money more effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and fragmented. Avoid sentence fragments like 'of. The materials.' and use complete sentences. Use linking words like 'although' or 'despite' to connect ideas. Also, clarify your points with specific examples or reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am often on the fence when it comes to choosing clothing products. Although I try to weigh the pros and cons of the materials, I sometimes end up buying unnecessary items despite my efforts to avoid them.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is affected by sentence fragments and grammar errors. Avoid breaking sentences abruptly and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, provide clearer examples and correct singular/plural forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think highly priced products are usually better than cheaper ones because a lot of craftsmanship and quality materials go into making them. For example, silk sarees are expensive but known for their superior quality.

× Yes, I enjoy shopping because it is one of the activity which helps me to relax and unwind after a busy day.

✓ Yes, I enjoy shopping because it is one of the activities which helps me to relax and unwind after a busy day.

The word 'activity' should be plural 'activities' because 'one of the' is followed by a plural noun. This is a common singular and plural agreement issue.

× Oh. Most of the time I go for window shopping just for fun to buy stationary items.

✓ Oh, most of the time I go for window shopping just for fun or to buy stationery items.

The word 'stationary' is incorrect here; it should be 'stationery' which means writing materials. Also, the sentence structure is improved by connecting the ideas properly.

× Yes, I often compare prices while shopping. It is one of the habit which I learned from my parents.

✓ Yes, I often compare prices while shopping. It is one of the habits which I learned from my parents.

'Habit' should be plural 'habits' because 'one of the' requires a plural noun following it.

× It helps me to buy the necessary things and award the unnecessary pouches.

✓ It helps me to buy the necessary things and avoid the unnecessary purchases.

The word 'award' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'avoid'. Also, 'pouches' is incorrect in this context; 'purchases' is appropriate.

× Which helps me to stick to my budget.

✓ This helps me to stick to my budget.

The sentence fragment 'Which helps me to stick to my budget.' is incomplete. It should be connected properly to the previous sentence or rephrased as a complete sentence.

× To buy something. Some more.

✓ To buy something more.

The original is fragmented and unclear. It should be combined into a complete sentence for clarity.

× Yes, I'm off and on fence when it comes to clothing products.

✓ Yes, I'm on the fence when it comes to clothing products.

The phrase 'off and on fence' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'on the fence', meaning undecided.

× However, I tried to weigh out the pros and cons of. The materials.

✓ However, I try to weigh the pros and cons of the materials.

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect tense. 'Tried' should be 'try' to match present tense, and the sentence should be complete without unnecessary periods.

× However, I end up buying unnecessary items which are not required.

✓ However, I end up buying unnecessary items which are not required.

This sentence is correct in tense and structure; no correction needed.

× Despite all the efforts which I take.

✓ Despite all the efforts I make.

The phrase 'which I take' is awkward; 'I make' is the correct collocation with 'efforts'. Also, the sentence fragment should be connected to a complete sentence.

× Yes, I think highly priced products are always better than. The cheaper ones because a lot of craftsmanship and quality of material.

✓ Yes, I think highly priced products are always better than the cheaper ones because a lot of craftsmanship and quality of material go into the product.

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. The period after 'than' is incorrect. Also, the verb 'go' is needed to agree with the plural subject 'craftsmanship and quality'.

× One for example are the silk saree.

✓ One example is the silk saree.

The phrase 'One for example are' is incorrect. It should be 'One example is'. Also, 'silk saree' is singular, so 'is' is appropriate.