Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: In your answer, try to use correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. For example, use present tense consistently and avoid unclear phrases like 'Grocery and close that are in it is also have made too.' Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely like shopping because it helps me relax and reduce stress. For example, on weekends, I usually go to the supermarket with my mom to buy snacks and groceries.

Gợi ý: Focus on using correct verb forms and clearer linking words. For example, say 'I usually compare prices when I shop' and 'I check prices on my phone or ask people who know.' Also, explain reasons clearly and avoid confusing phrases like 'I can't save my budget.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop, especially if there are many similar products. To do this, I check prices on my phone or ask people who know. This helps me save money and buy good quality items.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid fragmented sentences like 'their products. Is. Original Anne high-quality.' Instead, use complete sentences and linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices when shopping because there are many products. However, I prefer shopping at local supermarkets because their products are original and high-quality. Also, local markets have fresh goods, which makes choosing easier.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words like 'sometimes' and 'however' to compare ideas. Avoid unclear phrases like 'depends sound products' and 'in the chip in the local store.'

Ví dụ: Well, it depends on the product and the store. Sometimes, expensive products are not of good quality. However, in local stores, we can find cheaper products that are also good.

× Yes, I definitely like shopping because it made me feel relaxed and reduce stress.

✓ Yes, I definitely like shopping because it makes me feel relaxed and reduces stress.

The sentence mixes past tense 'made' with present tense context. Since the student is talking about a general truth, present tense 'makes' and 'reduces' should be used to maintain consistency.

× In my day, for example, on the weekend, I always go to the supermarket with my mom to buy some snack.

✓ In my day, for example, on the weekend, I always go to the supermarket with my mom to buy some snacks.

The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to multiple items bought at the supermarket.

× Grocery and close that are in it is also have made too.

✓ Groceries and clothes that are in it have also been bought.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Correct structure requires plural nouns 'groceries' and 'clothes', proper verb agreement 'have been bought', and clearer phrasing.

× Yes, I usually compare price when I show, especially when there are many similar products that I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop, especially when there are many similar products that I need to buy.

'Price' should be plural 'prices' because multiple items are compared. Also, 'show' is a typo and should be 'shop'.

× To avoid that problem I always checking down the price in the platform phone or ask the people that know clearly about its price.

✓ To avoid that problem, I always check the price on the phone platform or ask people who know clearly about its price.

The verb 'checking' is incorrectly used; it should be the base form 'check' after 'always'. Also, 'in the platform phone' is corrected to 'on the phone platform' for proper preposition use.

× Also I can't save my budget and get a high quality.

✓ Also, I can't save my budget and get high quality products.

The phrase 'get a high quality' is incomplete; it should specify 'products'. The modal verb 'can't' is used correctly but the sentence needs clarity.

× Yes, I find it quite difficult for me to make choice when I shop because there are so many products available.

✓ Yes, I find it quite difficult for me to make choices when I shop because there are so many products available.

'Choice' should be plural 'choices' because the context implies multiple options.

× I usually prefer shopping in a local supermarket rather than supermarket in the city because their products. Is. Original Anne high-quality, also local market alpha, fresh good, which makes it easier for me to choose.

✓ I usually prefer shopping in a local supermarket rather than a supermarket in the city because their products are original and high-quality. Also, local markets have fresh goods, which makes it easier for me to choose.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'Anne' and 'alpha'. Correct sentence structure and word choice improve clarity and grammar.

× Well, it depends sound products in their brand new store, sometime it is not in a good quality an.

✓ Well, it depends on the products in their brand new store; sometimes they are not of good quality.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Adding 'on' after 'depends', correcting 'sometime' to 'sometimes', and proper sentence structure improve clarity.

× There are so expensive but in the chip in the local store we can buy.

✓ Some products are expensive, but in the cheap local store, we can buy them.

The sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect word forms. 'So expensive' is corrected to 'some products are expensive', and 'chip' is corrected to 'cheap'.

× Product that I had met end with the cheaper price.

✓ I have found products that are cheaper.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Simplifying the sentence and using correct tense improves understanding.