Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不当，导致意思难以理解。建议你回答时保持句子简洁明了，避免语法错误，并且围绕主题展开，表达清楚自己的观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like shopping because it helps me relax and find things I need. However, I try to avoid impulsive buying to save money.

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了比较价格的原因，但句子结构不够完整，缺少连贯的连接词。建议你使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且详细说明为什么比较价格对你很重要。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to get good value for my money. Also, I like to find great discounts to stick to my budget.

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了购物时难以做决定，但句子不完整且含糊。建议你用完整的句子详细说明为什么难以做决定，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's difficult for me to make choices when shopping, especially for gifts. I often spend a lot of time thinking about what to buy to make sure the present is perfect.

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，句子不连贯，影响理解。建议你用完整句子表达观点，并举例说明为什么价格合理的产品更受你欢迎。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. I prefer to buy items that have a reasonable price and good quality, rather than just expensive brands.

× I spend money to him now, shocking every week.

✓ I am spending money on shopping every week.

原句中 'spend money to him' 用法错误，应该用 'spend money on' 表示花钱在某物上；'shocking every week' 语法和表达都不正确，推测想表达每周购物，改为 'spending money on shopping every week'。这里用现在进行时表示现在的习惯行为。

× I got into the hobby of impulsive buying and the.

✓ I got into the hobby of impulsive buying.

原句末尾 'and the' 不完整，造成句子结构错误，应去掉多余部分使句子完整。

× Shopping off of me since sentimental value.

✓ Shopping gives me sentimental value.

原句结构混乱，无法理解，推测想表达购物给自己带来情感价值，改为 'Shopping gives me sentimental value.' 使句子通顺。

× Anderson soul satisfaction.

✓ And also soul satisfaction.

原句 'Anderson soul satisfaction' 无意义，推测想表达 'and also soul satisfaction'，即购物带来心灵满足。

× Yes, I hope that I can get good value of money and I like thinking for great discount and also I like budget.

✓ Yes, I hope that I can get good value for money, and I like looking for great discounts, and also I like budgeting.

原句中 'value of money' 应为 'value for money'；'thinking for great discount' 应为 'looking for great discounts'；'like budget' 应为 'like budgeting'，动词形式错误。

× Every time I go for present, I will be in two months about it.

✓ Every time I go to buy a present, I spend about two months thinking about it.

原句 'I will be in two months about it' 语法错误，表达不清，改为现在时态 'I spend about two months thinking about it' 更符合语境。

× I like buy something with with the price reasonable.

✓ I like to buy something with a reasonable price.

原句缺少不定式 'to'，且 'with with' 重复，'the price reasonable' 结构不正确，应改为 'with a reasonable price'。

× I don't like him.

✓ I don't like that.

原句 'I don't like him' 中 'him' 指代不明，推测想表达不喜欢那种产品，改为 'that' 更合适。

× Products with value added investment.

✓ I don't like products with added value investment.

原句缺少主语和谓语，造成句子不完整，改为完整句子表达否定态度。