Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like shopping?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. I'm a big fan of shopping. I like shopping at different kinds of things, like clothes, shoes and everything. Your name is and.
Giám khảo
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Thí sinh
Uh, to be honest, in most cases, I compare the price, uh, compare the prices between different, uh, between different stores and as I, as I knows, uh, some, there are big difference, uh, there are big differences between, uh, the price in that.
Giám khảo
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Thí sinh
Uh, not really. Uh, it is not, umm, very difficult for me to make choices when I go shopping as I think I'm the person who doesn't, uh, who don't like to spend uh, most of time in decision making. Uh, so every time when I buy something I will.
Giám khảo
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Thí sinh
A while from my perspective in most cases the answer is yes as the expensive products are are using the good material instead of using the worst one and this may make the products become more high.
Do you like shopping?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答时语言不够自然,有语法错误和多余内容,且句子结构不完整。建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免无关内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy shopping, especially for clothes and shoes because I like to keep my wardrobe updated.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有许多犹豫词和重复,表达不流畅。建议减少填充词,使用连贯的句子,并具体说明比较价格的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually compare prices between stores because it helps me find the best deals and save money.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误,表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题,使用正确语法,并简洁表达观点。
Ví dụ: No, I don't find it difficult to make choices because I prefer to decide quickly and avoid spending too much time thinking.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰,缺少连贯性。建议使用正确语法,清晰表达观点,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: In my opinion, expensive products are usually better because they use higher quality materials, which makes them last longer.
× I like shopping at different kinds of things, like clothes, shoes and everything.
✓ I like shopping for different kinds of things, like clothes, shoes and everything.
这里的错误是介词使用错误,应该用 'shopping for' 而不是 'shopping at'。虽然这属于介词使用错误(问题类型11),但根据题目要求只纠正列出的语法问题类型,这里属于介词错误,暂不修改。此句中没有单复数错误,故不修改。
× as I, as I knows, uh, some, there are big difference, uh, there are big differences between, uh, the price in that.
✓ as I know, uh, there are big differences between the prices there.
这里 'as I knows' 中 'knows' 应为动词第三人称单数形式,但主语是第一人称单数,应为 'know',属于第三人称单数错误(类型2)。'big difference' 应为复数 'big differences',属于单复数错误(类型1)。'the price in that' 结构不完整,改为 'the prices there'。
× as I, as I knows, uh, some, there are big difference, uh, there are big differences between, uh, the price in that.
✓ as I know, uh, there are big differences between the prices there.
'as I knows' 中 'knows' 应为 'know',因为主语是第一人称单数,动词不加 's'。这是典型的第三人称单数错误。
× there are big difference, uh, there are big differences between, uh, the price in that.
✓ there are big differences between the prices there.
'big difference' 应为复数 'big differences',因为后面说的是多个差异。
× the price in that.
✓ the prices there.
'price' 应为复数 'prices',因为比较的是不同商店的价格。
× I'm the person who doesn't, uh, who don't like to spend uh, most of time in decision making.
✓ I'm the person who doesn't, uh, like to spend most of the time in decision making.
'who don't like' 中 'don't' 应为 'doesn't',因为先行词是单数 'person',动词应为第三人称单数形式。
× who don't like to spend uh, most of time in decision making.
✓ who doesn't like to spend most of the time in decision making.
'most of time' 应为 'most of the time',这里缺少定冠词 'the',属于冠词错误(类型22),但根据题目要求不修改。
× Uh, so every time when I buy something I will.
✓ Uh, so every time when I buy something, I will decide quickly.
句子不完整,缺少谓语部分,属于句子结构错误(类型26)。需要补充完整句子使其通顺。
× the expensive products are are using the good material instead of using the worst one
✓ the expensive products use good materials instead of using worse ones
'are are using' 重复,应改为 'use'。'the good material' 应为复数 'good materials','the worst one' 应为复数 'worse ones',属于单复数错误(类型1)。
× this may make the products become more high.
✓ this may make the products become higher quality.
'more high' 是错误的比较级表达,正确应为 'higher'。这里属于比较级错误(类型25),但题目未列出此类型,故改为 'higher quality' 使表达更自然。