Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and improving grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I definitely like shopping because it helps reduce my stress and makes me feel better. Whether I shop in malls or online, it feels like giving a gift to myself."

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely like shopping because it helps reduce my stress and makes me feel better. Whether I shop in malls or online, it feels like giving a gift to myself.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence. For example, "I usually don't compare prices because I don't shop frequently. When I do shop, I focus on what I need rather than looking for the best price."

Ví dụ: I usually don't compare prices because I don't shop frequently. When I do shop, I focus on what I need rather than looking for the best price.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. For example, "Actually, it's not difficult for me to make choices when shopping because I usually buy things immediately without much thought. However, I know this habit might not be good."

Ví dụ: Actually, it's not difficult for me to make choices when shopping because I usually buy things immediately without much thought. However, I know this habit might not be good.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain your opinion with specific reasons. For example, "Yes, I personally think expensive products are better because they have more attention to detail and higher quality, whereas cheaper products may be average."

Ví dụ: Yes, I personally think expensive products are better because they have more attention to detail and higher quality, whereas cheaper products may be average.

× Yes definitely I like shopping because when I'm going shopping even in the mall or buying through online, it's feel like it could reduce my stress and encourage my feeling as well.

✓ Yes definitely I like shopping because when I'm going shopping even in the mall or buying through online, it feels like it could reduce my stress and encourage my feelings as well.

The verb 'feel' should be in the third person singular present tense 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving verb form in present tense.

× Yes definitely I like shopping because when I'm going shopping even in the mall or buying through online, it's feel like it could reduce my stress and encourage my feeling as well.

✓ Yes definitely I like shopping because when I'm going shopping even in the mall or buying online, it feels like it could reduce my stress and encourage my feelings as well.

The preposition 'through' is incorrectly used with 'online'. The correct preposition is omitted; we say 'buying online' not 'buying through online'.

× Yes definitely I like shopping because when I'm going shopping even in the mall or buying through online, it's feel like it could reduce my stress and encourage my feeling as well.

✓ Yes definitely I like shopping because when I'm going shopping even in the mall or buying online, it feels like it could reduce my stress and encourage my feelings as well.

The noun 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to correctly express multiple emotional states. This is a singular and plural issue.

× For me, when I'm going out for shopping, I'm not compared to prices because for me, I'm not the person who usually hang out for shopping for like buying some new thing every weekend, every like, yeah, every week, every month, yeah.

✓ For me, when I go out shopping, I don't compare prices because I'm not the person who usually hangs out shopping to buy new things every weekend, every week, or every month.

The phrase 'I'm not compared to prices' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't compare prices' using present tense. Also, 'hang out' should be followed by 'hangs out' for third person singular, but here 'I' is first person singular, so 'hang out' is correct. The verb 'hang out for shopping for like buying some new thing' is awkward and corrected to 'hangs out shopping to buy new things'. This addresses past tense misuse and sentence structure.

× For me, when I'm going out for shopping, I'm not compared to prices because for me, I'm not the person who usually hang out for shopping for like buying some new thing every weekend, every like, yeah, every week, every month, yeah.

✓ For me, when I go out shopping, I don't compare prices because I'm not the person who usually hangs out shopping to buy new things every weekend, every week, or every month.

The preposition 'for' in 'going out for shopping' and 'hang out for shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go out shopping' and 'hang out shopping' without 'for'.

× So when I'm going at one, I will not come.

✓ So when I go once, I will not come again.

The phrase 'going at one' is incorrect; it should be 'go once'. Also, 'will not come' is awkward here; adding 'again' clarifies the meaning. This corrects verb form and sentence structure.

× Actually, for me it's not too difficult because umm, when I wanna buy something, I will buy it immediately without thinking anything.

✓ Actually, for me it's not too difficult because when I want to buy something, I buy it immediately without thinking about anything.

The phrase 'without thinking anything' is incorrect; the correct form is 'without thinking about anything'. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech.

× So it actually kinda is not a good like umm, Hobbit or something.

✓ So it actually kind of is not a good habit or something.

The word 'Hobbit' is a mispronunciation or misuse; the correct word is 'habit'. Also, 'kinda' is informal; 'kind of' is more appropriate. This corrects word choice and adjective/adverb usage.

× I can say that yeah, I it's not difficult for me.

✓ I can say that, yeah, it's not difficult for me.

The phrase 'I it's' is incorrect; the subject 'I' and the contraction 'it's' are redundant together. Removing 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, for me personally I think that expensive product are always better than the cheaper one because the expensive product they are details or they are pay a lot of attention to to like create that product comma if like the cheaper one they just like so so.

✓ Yes, for me personally I think that expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because expensive products have more details and they pay a lot of attention to creating those products, whereas cheaper ones are just so-so.

The nouns 'product' and 'one' should be plural 'products' and 'ones' to match the plural verb 'are'. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness. This addresses singular/plural issues and sentence structure.