Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like shopping?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm quietly love shopping because shopping can relieve my stress and make me relax throughout the day and also I can buy a lot of things which I want to do in the supermarket. So I love to shop, I love shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually compare the prices when I shop because I want to find out the most cost effective products. Besides, I usually compare the qualities with the same items from the different brands and use. This way I can know which items is suitable for me.
Giám khảo
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's quite a little difficult for me to make a choice when I shop because I'm afraid of making a choice because I I can't. I can't recognize which product is the most suitable items for me and it usually cost me a lot of time to do some choice about the products.
Giám khảo
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Thí sinh
I don't think the expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because I think it depends on its quality. If a expensive products have a much more better quality than the cheaper one, I think it's worth to cost more money to buy the expensive products.
Do you like shopping?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“quietly love”应为“quite love”,且句子较长且重复,建议简化表达,避免重复,并注意语法准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I quite enjoy shopping because it helps me relieve stress and relax. Also, I can buy many things I need at the supermarket.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整,但存在语法错误和表达不够自然,如“compare the qualities with the same items from the different brands and use”不清晰,建议使用更准确的表达并注意句子结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually compare prices to find the most cost-effective products. Besides, I also compare the quality of similar items from different brands to choose the most suitable one.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,如“quite a little difficult”和“because I I can't”,表达不够清晰,建议简化句子,避免重复,并提高表达的连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I find it a bit difficult to make choices when shopping because I often struggle to identify the most suitable product, which takes me a lot of time.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“a expensive products”和“much more better”,建议注意冠词和比较级的正确使用,同时简化表达使其更自然。
Ví dụ: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because it depends on their quality. If an expensive product has much better quality, then it's worth paying more for it.
× Yes, I'm quietly love shopping because shopping can relieve my stress and make me relax throughout the day and also I can buy a lot of things which I want to do in the supermarket.
✓ Yes, I quite love shopping because shopping can relieve my stress and make me relax throughout the day and also I can buy a lot of things which I want to do in the supermarket.
这里的副词“quietly”用错了,正确的副词是“quite”,表示“相当,十分”。“quietly”是“安静地”,与句意不符。
× This way I can know which items is suitable for me.
✓ This way I can know which items are suitable for me.
主语“items”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”,而不是单数“is”,以保持主谓一致。
× Yes, it's quite a little difficult for me to make a choice when I shop because I'm afraid of making a choice because I I can't.
✓ Yes, it's quite a little difficult for me to make a choice when I shop because I'm afraid of making a choice because I can't.
句中重复了“I”,应删除多余的“I”。
× I can't recognize which product is the most suitable items for me and it usually cost me a lot of time to do some choice about the products.
✓ I can't recognize which product is the most suitable item for me and it usually costs me a lot of time to make some choices about the products.
“items”应改为单数“item”,因为前面用的是单数“which product”。“cost”应加“s”变为“costs”,与主语“it”保持一致。短语“do some choice”不正确,应改为“make some choices”。
× If a expensive products have a much more better quality than the cheaper one, I think it's worth to cost more money to buy the expensive products.
✓ If an expensive product has much better quality than the cheaper one, I think it's worth spending more money to buy the expensive product.
“a”应改为“an”,因为“expensive”以元音音素开头。名词“products”应为单数“product”,与动词“has”保持一致。短语“much more better”冗余,应改为“much better”。“worth to cost”表达错误,应改为“worth spending”。