Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Apni answer e kichu sentence beshi use korechen, jar fole answer ta natural lage na. Apnar answer ke sohoje bujhte parbo emon vabe, prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor proyojone supporting details din. Apni jodi linking words use koren, tahole answer ta aro logical hobe. Apnar vocabulary o aro bhalo korte paren, jate answer ta natural lage.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like shopping because it helps me relax and enjoy my free time. Moreover, I usually shop for clothes and sometimes for my family. I prefer to choose the time myself so that I can shop without any rush.

Gợi ý: Apnar answer e kichu word use kora hoyeche jeta natural English e beshi use hoy na, jemon 'skeptical' er jaygay 'careful' ba 'cautious' bola bhalo. Apni prothome direct uttor din, tarpor linking word diye supporting details din. Apnar vocabulary aro relevant hote pare, ebong sentence structure aro sohoje bujhar moto hote pare.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to get the best deal. For example, I check different shops and try to bargain to save money. This way, I can buy good products at a lower price.

Gợi ý: Apnar answer e kichu sentence structure bhul ache, jar fole bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni prothome direct uttor din, tarpor linking word diye supporting details din. Apnar vocabulary aro relevant hote pare ebong sentence gulo sohoje bujhar moto hote pare. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shothik grammar diye banate.

Ví dụ: Sometimes, I find it difficult to choose products because there are many options. However, I feel confident when I have already researched online. Also, I often ask my friends for advice to help me decide.

Gợi ý: Apnar answer e kichu sentence structure ebong grammar bhul ache. Apni prothome direct uttor din, tarpor linking word diye supporting details din. Apnar vocabulary aro relevant hote pare ebong sentence gulo sohoje bujhar moto hote pare. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shothik grammar diye banate ebong proyojone example din.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. For example, in Dhaka, you can find good quality products at cheaper prices in local markets. Also, bargaining helps to get better deals than buying expensive items.

× It makes me more passionate, it makes me more relaxed and very flippant to go to shop the unexplained things or shop on clothes.

✓ It makes me more passionate, more relaxed, and very happy to go shopping for unexplained things or clothes.

The word 'flippant' is incorrectly used here; it means 'not showing a serious or respectful attitude' which does not fit the context. The correct adjective should express positive feelings like 'happy'. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' and 'shop on clothes' should be 'shop for clothes'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× And I get the time I I choose to go shopping for myself and for my family.

✓ And I take the time I choose to go shopping for myself and my family.

The original sentence has redundancy ('I I') and awkward phrasing. 'Get the time' is not idiomatic; 'take the time' is the correct expression. Removing redundancy and using proper idiomatic expressions improves sentence structure.

× I would love to compare the price and bargain price for the specific product because I love to gain and make profit from this product and make competitive advantage.

✓ I would love to compare prices and bargain for specific products because I love to gain and make profits from these products and create a competitive advantage.

The singular 'price' should be plural 'prices' when comparing multiple items. 'Bargain price' should be 'bargain for prices' or 'bargain prices'. Also, 'make profit' should be 'make profits' to match plural context. These changes correct number agreement and improve clarity.

× So I am very skeptical to know the price and to bargain some.

✓ So I am very careful to know the price and to bargain a bit.

'Skeptical to know' is incorrect; 'skeptical' means doubtful and is not appropriate here. 'Careful' fits better. Also, 'bargain some' is incomplete; 'bargain a bit' or 'bargain some' needs an object. Correct preposition and word choice improve meaning.

× Or sometimes it makes me more complex and confused to choose the product and almost me.

✓ Sometimes it makes me more confused and uncertain when choosing a product.

The phrase 'makes me more complex and confused' is incorrect; 'complex' does not describe a person’s feeling. 'Almost me' is unclear and unnecessary. The corrected sentence uses appropriate adjectives and clearer structure.

× Sometimes I'm very confident to get the specific product because I searched on the online or somewhere else, so I get help from my friends to pick the product from shopping.

✓ Sometimes I'm very confident to get a specific product because I searched online or elsewhere, so I get help from my friends to pick the product while shopping.

'Searched on the online' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'searched online'. 'Somewhere else' is vague but acceptable; 'elsewhere' is better. 'Pick the product from shopping' is awkward; 'while shopping' is clearer. Correct prepositions and phrasing improve clarity.

× Not really, not all the time is the expensive product is quite good than the cheap rate product.

✓ Not really, the expensive product is not always better than the cheap product.

The original sentence has redundant 'is' and awkward phrasing. 'Cheap rate product' is incorrect; 'cheap product' is better. The pronoun and verb placement are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× In our country, especially in the Dhaka, you can find the best product and more sophisticated product in the cheap market.

✓ In our country, especially in Dhaka, you can find the best and more sophisticated products in the cheap market.

'In the Dhaka' is incorrect; 'in Dhaka' is correct. 'Best product and more sophisticated product' should be plural 'products' to match context. 'Cheap market' is acceptable but could be 'affordable market'. Correct preposition and pluralization improve the sentence.

× You can bargain product from the market then the higher expensive product.

✓ You can bargain for products in the market better than the more expensive ones.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Bargain product' should be 'bargain for products'. 'Then the higher expensive product' is incorrect; 'better than the more expensive ones' conveys the intended meaning. Correct sentence structure and word choice improve clarity.