Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and lacks clear sentence boundaries, which makes it hard to follow. Try to use shorter, clearer sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like shopping, especially buying clothes. It helps me relieve stress. When I get money from my parents, I enjoy shopping with my friends and family. We usually go to the mall to buy new dresses with the latest designs.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and is a bit repetitive. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I compare prices when I shop because some shops increase the prices of clothes beyond their actual value. Therefore, bargaining helps me save money and get better deals.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete at the end. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when shopping because there are many brands, designs, and colors. Since I cannot afford all of them, I have to carefully select one or two clothes that I like the most.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammar errors and filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Try to avoid fillers and use correct verb tenses. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think expensive products are usually better than cheaper ones because they have higher quality. That is why most people who can afford them prefer expensive products, while others choose cheaper alternatives.

× Yes, I do like shopping buying clothes is one of my favorite things to do when I get stress and when I get money from my parents I love to do shopping with my friends and family we go together to the mall to buy new dresses with new designs and.

✓ Yes, I do like shopping. Buying clothes is one of my favorite things to do when I am stressed and when I get money from my parents. I love to go shopping with my friends and family. We go together to the mall to buy new dresses with new designs.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation and conjunctions, making it confusing. Separating into clear sentences and using 'buying' correctly as a gerund improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I compare prices when I go to shop because the people from the shop raise the amount of the prices of clothes than actual amount.

✓ Yes, I compare prices when I go shopping because the people at the shop raise the prices of clothes above the actual amount.

The preposition 'to' in 'go to shop' should be 'shopping' to indicate the activity. Also, 'people from the shop' is better expressed as 'people at the shop'. The phrase 'raise the amount of the prices' is awkward; 'raise the prices' is correct.

× So we need to bargain to get benefited and to save extra money from that cloth it is beneficial to us to buy.

✓ So we need to bargain to benefit and save extra money on that clothing; it is beneficial for us to buy.

The phrase 'get benefited' is incorrect; 'to benefit' is correct. 'Save extra money from that cloth' should be 'save extra money on that clothing'. Also, 'beneficial to us to buy' is better as 'beneficial for us to buy'.

× Yes, it's it's difficult for me to make choices because there we can see so many brands, so many designs, so many colors.

✓ Yes, it's difficult for me to make choices because there are so many brands, so many designs, and so many colors.

The phrase 'there we can see' is awkward; 'there are' is the correct existential construction. Also, 'it's it's' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'it's'.

× It is difficult to choose one or two clothes because we can't afford all of them.

✓ It is difficult to choose one or two pieces of clothing because we can't afford all of them.

The word 'clothes' is plural and uncountable in this context; 'pieces of clothing' is more appropriate when counting individual items.

× So this is the actual problem to us to to.

✓ So this is the actual problem for us.

The phrase 'problem to us' should be 'problem for us'. The sentence also contains an incomplete phrase 'to to' which is removed for clarity.

× Umm yes, I think expensive products are better than cheaper ones because the expensive ones contain the better quality and the cheaper ones contained a low quality.

✓ Umm yes, I think expensive products are better than cheaper ones because the expensive ones have better quality and the cheaper ones have lower quality.

The verb 'contain' is incorrect when referring to quality; 'have' is appropriate. Also, 'the better quality' should be 'better quality' without 'the'. 'Contained a low quality' is incorrect tense and article usage; 'have lower quality' is correct.

× Uh, that is why most of the people prefer the expensive one. Those who can afford it and those who can't, they prefer cheaper ones.

✓ Uh, that is why most people prefer the expensive ones. Those who can afford them do, and those who can't prefer cheaper ones.

'Most of the people' is better as 'most people'. 'The expensive one' should be plural 'the expensive ones' to match 'cheaper ones'. The pronoun usage is clarified by removing unnecessary 'they' and restructuring the sentence.