Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like shopping?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like shopping because I enjoy the feelings when I change the money with the products and my parents and I can buy everything in the supermarket like Sam's and so on and I enjoy it.
Giám khảo
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always compare price when I was shopping because I think I don't have a lot of money, so I need to compare the price for the products, for the same products I think.
Giám khảo
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always want to buy everything in the supermarket, but I should. To choose something I need choose the products which is necessary for me, so I always think about it.
Giám khảo
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so, because I think expensive products has a good quality than the cheaper one. The higher price always better than cheaper ones I think because I think it's very.
Do you like shopping?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有些冗长且表达不够自然,建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,并且更准确地描述购物的感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like shopping because it feels rewarding to exchange money for useful products. My parents and I often shop together at supermarkets like Sam's, which makes the experience enjoyable.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当,且表达重复,建议使用正确时态并简洁表达比较价格的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I have a limited budget and want to find the best deal for the same products.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,建议完整表达想法,使用连词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, it can be difficult because I want to buy many things, but I have to focus on choosing only the necessary products to avoid overspending.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达重复且不清晰,建议用更准确的句子表达观点,并给出具体理由。
Ví dụ: I believe expensive products are usually better because they often have higher quality materials and better durability compared to cheaper ones.
× I always compare price when I was shopping because I think I don't have a lot of money, so I need to compare the price for the products, for the same products I think.
✓ I always compare prices when I am shopping because I think I don't have a lot of money, so I need to compare the prices for the products, for the same products I think.
这里的price应该用复数形式prices,因为指的是多种商品的价格。名词的单复数要根据具体语境来确定,复数表示多个对象。
× I always compare price when I was shopping because I think I don't have a lot of money, so I need to compare the price for the products, for the same products I think.
✓ I always compare prices when I am shopping because I think I don't have a lot of money, so I need to compare the prices for the products, for the same products I think.
这里的时间状语是一般现在时的频率副词always,动词时态应与之保持一致,不能用过去时was shopping,应改为现在进行时am shopping。
× Yes, I always want to buy everything in the supermarket, but I should. To choose something I need choose the products which is necessary for me, so I always think about it.
✓ Yes, I always want to buy everything in the supermarket, but I shouldn't. To choose something, I need to choose the products which are necessary for me, so I always think about it.
句子中should后缺少否定形式shouldn't,且后面句子缺少to不定式的to,products是复数,谓语动词应使用are。句子结构不完整,需补全。
× I need choose the products which is necessary for me, so I always think about it.
✓ I need to choose the products which are necessary for me, so I always think about it.
products是复数,谓语动词应使用are而不是is。主谓一致错误。
× Yes, I think so, because I think expensive products has a good quality than the cheaper one.
✓ Yes, I think so, because I think expensive products have better quality than the cheaper ones.
products是复数,谓语动词应使用have而不是has;quality是不可数名词,不用加冠词a;比较级better比good quality更合适;cheaper one应改为cheaper ones与products复数保持一致。
× The higher price always better than cheaper ones I think because I think it's very.
✓ The higher price is always better than cheaper ones, I think, because I think it's very good.
句子缺少系动词is;higher price前应加定冠词the;句子末尾不完整,缺少形容词good等补充说明。