Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, using correct grammar, and avoiding redundancy. Also, limit your answer to about 3-5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy shopping. I often buy cosmetics, dresses, and perfumes. Perfumes are my favorite, so I always look for new scents when I go to the market.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and a bit confusing. Make sure to finish your sentences and clearly explain your reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because some products may be overpriced. For example, I check different stores to find the best deal before buying something new.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat unclear. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence and be specific about your experience.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often find it difficult to make choices when shopping. For instance, recently I went shopping for a wedding dress and felt very confused because there were so many options to choose from.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I believe that expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, cheaper products can be just as good, especially if you consider the quality and value for money.

× I always shop cosmetics, dress and many kind of perfume.

✓ I always shop for cosmetics, dresses, and many kinds of perfume.

The phrase 'many kind of perfume' is incorrect because 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. Also, 'dress' should be pluralized to 'dresses' to match the plural context. Additionally, 'shop cosmetics' is missing the preposition 'for' to indicate what is being shopped.

× Perfume is my favorite so I know when I go to market I always.

✓ Perfume is my favorite, so I always buy it when I go to the market.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. It needs a subject and verb after 'I always' to complete the thought. Adding 'buy it' clarifies the action, and 'the market' requires the definite article 'the'.

× not every product or the real price state

✓ not every product shows the real price

The phrase 'the real price state' is incorrect. 'State' is not the correct noun here; 'shows' as a verb fits better. Also, 'the real price' is correct with the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific price.

× I always compare with other price.

✓ I always compare with other prices.

The noun 'price' should be pluralized to 'prices' because comparison is usually made between multiple prices. The preposition 'with' is correctly used here.

× When I buy new things I try to.

✓ When I buy new things, I try to compare prices.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object of 'try to.' Adding 'compare prices' completes the thought and relates to the previous context.

× Frequently difficult for me to make choice when I shop.

✓ It is frequently difficult for me to make choices when I shop.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'It is' completes the sentence. Also, 'choice' should be pluralized to 'choices' to match the context.

× Like today ago I I went to shopping for buy a dress for my wedding so I feel so confused.

✓ Like today, I went shopping to buy a dress for my wedding, so I felt very confused.

The phrase 'today ago' is incorrect; 'today' alone suffices. 'Went to shopping' should be 'went shopping.' 'For buy' should be 'to buy.' The verb 'feel' should be in past tense 'felt' to match the past action.

× So that's it I think.

✓ So that's it, I think.

A comma is needed after 'So that's it' to separate the clauses properly.

× Sometime expensive are not good because as a girl I think every product are not be expensive for me.

✓ Sometimes expensive products are not good because, as a girl, I think not every product needs to be expensive for me.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes.' 'Expensive' needs a noun, so 'expensive products' is correct. 'Every product are' is incorrect; 'every product' is singular and should be followed by 'is' or rephrased. The phrase 'are not be expensive' is incorrect; 'needs to be expensive' fits better.