Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like shopping?
Thí sinh
Of course, I really enjoyed it simply because it's a right way to discover new products and drinks. Also, I often go with go to shopping area with Spring by train, which makes it a social activity and I consider it exciting to find good news.
Giám khảo
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Thí sinh
For sure, I really can't be bright when I serve because I want to save money. I often use bright comparison of a website to find the best. This hobby come from my parents in place who taught me to research before buying. It allows me to stay within my.
Giám khảo
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Thí sinh
Suddenly the pace. Part of the reason for this is that they're mainly attractive options. I spend a lot of time comparing flights and reading reviews before making a decision. As a research. I sometimes believe their stuff aim behind this because I can't make up my mind.
Giám khảo
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Thí sinh
It depends on the product. For electronics, the higher price often means better technology. However, with its cost to coding, sometimes players offer similar size inquiries. Consider the purpose and offer.
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Part 1
Do you like shopping?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thì sai và từ không phù hợp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it allows me to discover new products and drinks. Moreover, I often go to shopping areas with my friend Spring by train, which makes it a social and exciting activity.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Hãy tránh sử dụng các từ không đúng nghĩa và hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to save money. I usually use websites to find the best deals. This habit comes from my parents who taught me to research before buying, so I can stay within my budget.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích rõ ràng hơn với các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes it is difficult for me to make choices because there are many attractive options. Therefore, I spend a lot of time comparing prices and reading reviews before deciding.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh các cụm từ không rõ nghĩa và thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và logic hơn.
Ví dụ: It depends on the product. For example, expensive electronics usually have better technology. However, sometimes cheaper products can offer similar features. So, it's important to consider the purpose and value before buying.
Ngữ pháp
× I really enjoyed it simply because it's a right way to discover new products and drinks.
✓ I really enjoy it simply because it's the right way to discover new products and drinks.
The sentence uses 'enjoyed' which is past tense, but the context suggests a general preference, so present tense 'enjoy' is appropriate. Also, 'a right way' should be 'the right way' because it refers to a specific way.
× I often go with go to shopping area with Spring by train, which makes it a social activity and I consider it exciting to find good news.
✓ I often go to the shopping area with Spring by train, which makes it a social activity and I consider it exciting to find good news.
The phrase 'go with go to shopping area' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the shopping area'. The preposition 'to' is used with 'go' to indicate destination. Also, 'shopping area' needs the definite article 'the'.
× I often use bright comparison of a website to find the best.
✓ I often use price comparison websites to find the best.
The phrase 'bright comparison of a website' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'price comparison websites' to correctly express the idea of comparing prices online.
× This hobby come from my parents in place who taught me to research before buying.
✓ This hobby comes from my parents who taught me to research before buying.
The verb 'come' should be 'comes' to agree with the singular subject 'hobby'. Also, 'in place' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.
× It allows me to stay within my.
✓ It allows me to stay within my budget.
The sentence is incomplete; 'my' needs an object. Adding 'budget' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.
× Suddenly the pace.
✓ Suddenly, the pace changes.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding a verb 'changes' completes the sentence and makes it meaningful.
× As a research. I sometimes believe their stuff aim behind this because I can't make up my mind.
✓ As a researcher, I sometimes believe there is a strategy behind this because I can't make up my mind.
'As a research' is incorrect; it should be 'As a researcher'. 'Their stuff aim behind this' is unclear; 'there is a strategy behind this' is a clearer expression.
× However, with its cost to coding, sometimes players offer similar size inquiries.
✓ However, despite the cost, sometimes sellers offer similar quality products.
The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and phrases. 'With its cost to coding' and 'players offer similar size inquiries' do not make sense. Replacing with 'despite the cost' and 'sellers offer similar quality products' clarifies the meaning.
× Consider the purpose and offer.
✓ Consider the purpose and the offer.
Adding the definite article 'the' before 'offer' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
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