Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了购物带来的快乐感，但句子结构较为重复且有语法错误，建议简化句子并避免重复，同时注意语法准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like shopping because it makes me happy and helps me forget daily stress by releasing dopamine in my brain.

Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰，表达了比较价格的原因，但句子有些冗长且部分表达不够地道，建议使用更简洁的句子并注意词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because as a student, I have a limited budget and want to save money for important things like travel and learning new skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中提到星座信息不够相关，且句子结构不够自然，建议直接回答问题并提供具体理由，避免无关信息。

Ví dụ: No, I find it easy to make choices because I know exactly what I want and usually prefer cheaper options.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱且有语法错误，建议简化表达，明确观点并用具体例子支持。

Ví dụ: I don't think expensive products are always better because sometimes the same item is sold at different prices in different stores, but the quality remains the same.

× Yes, I like shopping because shopping can give me a sense of happiness and make let me forget some bad things in my daily life because shopping can stimulate my brain to release the dopamine which is the material make me happy.

✓ Yes, I like shopping because shopping can give me a sense of happiness and make me forget some bad things in my daily life because shopping can stimulate my brain to release dopamine, which is the material that makes me happy.

原句中“make let me forget”结构错误，应为“make me forget”，因为“make”后面直接跟动词原形表示使役。并且“the dopamine which is the material make me happy”中缺少关系代词“that”，且动词“make”应为第三人称单数“makes”，因为主语是“material”。

× I always compare the prices when I am shopping because I'm a student, I don't have too much money on shopping.

✓ I always compare the prices when I am shopping because I'm a student, I don't have much money for shopping.

“too much money on shopping”中“too much”用于不可数名词时表示过多，语境中应表达“没有很多钱”，应使用“much money”，且介词应为“for shopping”而非“on shopping”。

× I need to compare the cheaper one and save some money to do something significant such as travels and studies and new skills.

✓ I need to compare the cheaper ones and save some money to do something significant such as traveling, studying, and learning new skills.

“the cheaper one”应为复数“the cheaper ones”，因为比较的是多个价格。并且“travels and studies and new skills”表达不自然，应改为动名词形式“traveling, studying, and learning new skills”。

× No, because I'm Aries, I always move too fast and clearly know what I need.

✓ No, because I'm an Aries, I always move too fast and clearly know what I need.

“I'm Aries”缺少冠词，应为“I'm an Aries”，因为“Aries”是星座名词，前面需要不定冠词。

× Actually I prefer choose some cheaper one.

✓ Actually, I prefer to choose some cheaper ones.

“prefer choose”缺少不定式“to”，应为“prefer to choose”。“some cheaper one”应为复数“some cheaper ones”，因为指多个物品。

× I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper one because the same place can be houses in two different shops and their prices are different.

✓ I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because the same place can be housed in two different shops and their prices are different.

“cheaper one”应为复数“cheaper ones”，因为比较的是多个产品。

× I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper one because the same place can be houses in two different shops and their prices are different.

✓ I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because the same place can be housed in two different shops and their prices are different.

“can be houses in”中“houses”用错，应为动词过去分词“housed”，表示被安置。

× But you can't say they have different quality right? Because they are same things.

✓ But you can't say they have different quality, right? Because they are the same things.

“they are same things”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“the same things”，表示“相同的东西”。