Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cavabınız təbii və mövzuya uyğun olsa da, "uh" kimi sözləri azaltmaq və cümlələri daha qısa və aydın etmək faydalı olar. Daha çox müxtəlif sözlər istifadə edərək fikrinizi daha təsirli ifadə edə bilərsiniz.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relax and improves my mental well-being. For example, buying new clothes always cheers me up.

Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və təkrarlamalar var. Daha sadə və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin, həmçinin əlaqələndirici sözlərlə fikirlərinizi daha məntiqli edin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to find the best deals. For instance, I check prices in different stores or online before buying.

Gợi ý: Cavabınızda çoxlu "uh" və təkrarlamalar var, bu da təbii danışığı azaldır. Cümlələri daha qısa və aydın qurun, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often find it hard to make decisions when shopping. Therefore, I usually bring a friend or family member to help me choose.

Gợi ý: Cümlələriniz qarışıq və anlaşılmazdır. Daha sadə və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin, fikirlərinizi dəstəkləmək üçün konkret nümunələr verin.

Ví dụ: I think expensive products are usually better, but not always. For example, sometimes cheaper items can work just as well as costly ones.

× For being honest, uh, definitely I compare prices when I shop because when I go to shopping, most of the time I compare the prices like with them another shop or on trend deal or chain and other devices. That's why it's so crucial for me.

✓ To be honest, uh, definitely I compare prices when I shop because when I go shopping, most of the time I compare the prices with another shop or on trend deals or chains and other devices. That's why it's so crucial for me.

The phrase 'For being honest' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'To be honest'. Also, 'go to shopping' should be 'go shopping' as 'shopping' is used without 'to' after 'go'. The preposition 'like with them another shop' is incorrect; it should be 'with another shop'. Additionally, 'on trend deal or chain and other devices' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'on trend deals or chains and other devices' is more appropriate. These corrections improve preposition and phrase usage.

× To be honest, yes, umm, it sometimes can be challenging for me when I choose something or, uh, buy something. That's why most of the time when I go shopping, I invite my friends or one of the my family members too because, uh, I can't decide uh, something when I buy, uh, just own.

✓ To be honest, yes, umm, it can sometimes be challenging for me when I choose something or, uh, buy something. That's why most of the time when I go shopping, I invite my friends or one of my family members too because, uh, I can't decide on something when I buy just on my own.

The phrase 'one of the my family members' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my family members' without 'the'. Also, 'I can't decide uh, something when I buy, uh, just own' is incorrect; it should be 'I can't decide on something when I buy just on my own'. The pronoun usage and preposition 'on' are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Uh, to be honest, in my opinion yes, but not all of the time because sometimes there are some expensive things. Umm can be so bad when we compare the cheapest 1 and the most expensive one. Sometimes the cheapest one with but most of the time in my opinion is expensive ones are more.

✓ Uh, to be honest, in my opinion yes, but not all of the time because sometimes there are some expensive things that can be so bad when we compare the cheapest one and the most expensive one. Sometimes the cheapest one is better, but most of the time, in my opinion, the expensive ones are better.

The original sentence has unclear quantifier and comparative usage, such as 'cheapest 1' instead of 'cheapest one', and incomplete phrases like 'Sometimes the cheapest one with but most of the time in my opinion is expensive ones are more.' The correction clarifies quantifiers and comparisons, making the sentence grammatically correct and understandable.