Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but try to avoid redundancy and make it more natural. For example, instead of saying 'I love going for window shopping especially,' you can say 'I especially enjoy window shopping.' Also, try to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences for better effectiveness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like shopping because it helps me relax. I even set aside a monthly budget for it. I especially enjoy window shopping as it allows me to explore new trends without spending money.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but needs better structure and linking words. Also, avoid repetition and grammatical errors like 'that that' and 'proceeded to buying it.' Try to connect your ideas smoothly and be more specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because some vendors overcharge customers. For instance, once I found a product expensive at one shop, but after checking another vendor, I got it at a reasonable price, so I bought it there.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting minor errors and using linking words. For example, avoid repeating words like 'my my' and use phrases like 'which helps me' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: No, it's not difficult because I prepare a To-Do List before shopping, which helps me distinguish between my wants and needs, ensuring I don't overspend.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good points but contains some unclear phrases like 'to launch the cheap product.' Try to use clearer expressions and link your ideas better. Also, avoid repeating similar sentences and focus on specific reasons.

Ví dụ: No, expensive products are not always better. Sometimes, cheaper items have better quality depending on the materials used. Personally, I avoid spending beyond my budget for expensive products when affordable options are good enough.

× Then I proceeded to buying it.

✓ Then I proceeded to buy it.

The verb 'proceed' is followed by the infinitive form 'to buy', not the gerund 'buying'. Using 'to buying' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'proceed to' + base verb.

× I love going for window shopping especially.

✓ I especially love going window shopping.

The phrase 'going for window shopping' is incorrect. 'Window shopping' is an uncountable noun and does not require 'for'. The correct expression is 'going window shopping'. Also, the adverb 'especially' is better placed before the verb for clarity.

× I have already made it to the To Do List and this helps me to put my my wants and needs in check so I don't end up spending more than I budgeted.

✓ I have already added it to the To Do List and this helps me to keep my wants and needs in check so I don't end up spending more than I budgeted.

The phrase 'made it to the To Do List' is awkward; 'added it to the To Do List' is more appropriate. Also, 'put my my wants and needs in check' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep my wants and needs in check'. The repeated 'my' is a typo.

× I for one do not go for something way above my budget to launch the cheap product.

✓ I, for one, do not go for something way above my budget to buy the cheap product.

The phrase 'to launch the cheap product' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'to buy the cheap product'. 'Launch' is not the correct verb here. Also, commas are needed around 'for one' as a parenthetical expression.