Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਕੁਝ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕ ਸੰਰਚਨਾ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਕੁਦਰਤੀ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ, ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਵਰਤੋ ਅਤੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ 2-3 ਵਾਕਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਸੀਮਿਤ ਰੱਖੋ।

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping with my family and friends on weekends because it is a good time to relax and have fun together.

Gợi ý: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਗਲਤ ਹਨ ਅਤੇ ਅਰਥ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਬਣਾਓ ਅਤੇ ਕਾਰਨ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਤਰੀਕੇ ਨਾਲ ਦੱਸੋ।

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because sometimes cheaper products offer good quality, and I want to save money.

Gợi ý: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਕੁਦਰਤੀ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ, ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋ।

Ví dụ: Yes, I find it difficult to choose because when I see many options, I get confused and take time to decide.

Gợi ý: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਚੋਣ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸੰਖੇਪ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ, ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋ।

Ví dụ: I think expensive products are usually better because they are made with high quality materials and last longer.

× Yes, I like shopping with my family and my friends in the weekend.

✓ Yes, I like shopping with my family and my friends on the weekend.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'the weekend'. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to days or parts of days like 'the weekend'. ਇੱਥੇ 'in' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'on' ਵਰਤਣਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ ਕਿਉਂਕਿ ਅਸੀਂ ਦਿਨਾਂ ਜਾਂ ਦਿਨਾਂ ਦੇ ਹਿੱਸਿਆਂ ਲਈ 'on' ਵਰਤਦੇ ਹਾਂ।

× I spend the some time for these things because I enjoy with my family and friends all that time.

✓ I spend some time on these things because I enjoy being with my family and friends all the time.

The phrase 'the some time' is incorrect; it should be 'some time'. Also, 'enjoy with' is incorrect; the verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund or a noun, so 'enjoy being with' is correct. Additionally, 'all that time' should be 'all the time' to express frequency. ' the some time' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'some time' ਵਰਤਣਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ। 'enjoy with' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, ਇਸ ਲਈ 'enjoy being with' ਸਹੀ ਹੈ। 'all that time' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'all the time' ਵਰਤੋ।

× Definitely I've compared the prices when I shop because some things are very good in the cheap price so that time I will not to want the too much money to as compared of any other initial things.

✓ Definitely, I compare prices when I shop because some things are very good at a cheap price, so I do not want to spend too much money compared to other similar items.

The use of present perfect 'I've compared' is incorrect here; simple present 'I compare' fits better as the action is habitual. 'in the cheap price' should be 'at a cheap price'. 'will not to want' is incorrect; it should be 'do not want'. 'as compared of' should be 'compared to'. 'I've compared' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'I compare' ਵਰਤੋ ਕਿਉਂਕਿ ਇਹ ਆਦਤ ਹੈ। 'in the cheap price' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'at a cheap price'। 'will not to want' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, 'do not want' ਸਹੀ ਹੈ। 'as compared of' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'compared to' ਵਰਤੋ।

× Uh, absolutely. I'm the choosy person if I have to. See the different type of varieties in front of me so that time I will confused.

✓ Uh, absolutely. I'm a choosy person when I have to see different types of varieties in front of me, so at that time I get confused.

'the choosy person' should be 'a choosy person' as it is a general statement. 'See' should be connected properly in the sentence. 'different type' should be 'different types' (plural). 'I will confused' is incorrect; it should be 'I get confused' or 'I am confused'. ' the choosy person' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'a choosy person' ਵਰਤੋ। 'See' ਨੂੰ ਵਾਕ ਵਿੱਚ ਠੀਕ ਜੋੜੋ। 'different type' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'different types' ਵਰਤੋ। 'I will confused' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, 'I get confused' ਸਹੀ ਹੈ।

× I am not to choose easily to any good one on those things.

✓ I do not choose easily any good one among those things.

'am not to choose' is incorrect; simple present 'do not choose' is appropriate. 'to any good one' is incorrect; 'any good one' suffices. 'on those things' should be 'among those things' to indicate selection from a group. ' am not to choose' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'do not choose' ਵਰਤੋ। 'to any good one' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ। 'on those things' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'among those things' ਵਰਤੋ।

× Mostly expressive products are always better than cheaper because their price are more because they are the making the best quality.

✓ Mostly expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because their prices are higher as they are made with the best quality.

'expressive' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'expensive'. 'price are' should be 'prices are' (plural). 'they are the making' is incorrect; it should be 'they are made'. ' expressive' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'expensive' ਵਰਤੋ। 'price are' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'prices are' ਵਰਤੋ। 'they are the making' ਗਲਤ ਹੈ, 'they are made' ਸਹੀ ਹੈ।

× They have to manufacturing under the best brands and they have too long life stay.

✓ They are manufactured under the best brands and they have a long lifespan.

'have to manufacturing' is incorrect; correct form is 'are manufactured'. 'under the best brands' is acceptable but 'by the best brands' is more common. 'too long life stay' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'a long lifespan'. ' have to manufacturing' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'are manufactured' ਵਰਤੋ। 'too long life stay' ਦੀ ਥਾਂ 'a long lifespan' ਵਰਤੋ।