Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。意味が伝わりにくいため、より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文法の基本を見直しましょう。例えば、感情や理由をはっきり述べ、友人との関係についても具体的に説明すると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like shopping because it makes me feel excited and relaxed. Also, when I shop with my friends, it helps us strengthen our friendship.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。価格を比較する理由を具体的に説明し、正しい文法を使う練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually compare prices because I want to find the best deal and save money.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤っています。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、好きな店がある場合は選びやすい理由を具体的に説明すると良いです。

Ví dụ: No, I don't find it difficult because I usually shop at my favorite stores where I know what I like.

Gợi ý: 意味が伝わりにくく、文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に対して明確に意見を述べ、理由を具体的に説明することが必要です。ブランド名だけでなく品質や価値についても触れると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive products are always better because sometimes cheaper products have the same quality without the brand name.

× Yes, I like shopping because it's giving me a sense of excitement and it helps me really wish less.

✓ Yes, I like shopping because it gives me a sense of excitement and it helps me really wish less.

The phrase 'it's giving me' is incorrect here because the verb 'give' should be in the simple present tense to express a general truth or habitual action. Using the present continuous 'is giving' suggests an action happening right now, which is not appropriate in this context.

× Additionally, when I go shopping with my friend my our connection and bond is.

✓ Additionally, when I go shopping with my friend, our connection and bond grow stronger.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains redundant possessive pronouns ('my our'). It lacks a proper verb to complete the thought. The correction adds a verb phrase 'grow stronger' to complete the sentence and removes the redundant pronoun.

× I think most people doesn't have enough money to buy old things sold.

✓ I think most people don't have enough money to buy old things sold.

The subject 'most people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't' to agree in number. 'Doesn't' is singular and does not match the plural subject.

× They need to compare place price when they shop.

✓ They need to compare prices when they shop.

The phrase 'compare place price' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'compare prices'. Also, 'place' is unnecessary here and should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× No I don't think so. I hope favorite store even if the shop have a lot of fears so I find it easier to choose my.

✓ No, I don't think so. I prefer my favorite store even if the shop has a lot of options, so I find it easier to choose.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'hope favorite store' and 'shop have a lot of fears'. The correction clarifies the meaning by using 'prefer my favorite store' and correcting subject-verb agreement ('shop has'). It also completes the sentence logically.

× No, I think so expensive product include their brand name so.

✓ No, I think expensive products include their brand name.

The phrase 'so expensive product' is incorrect because 'product' should be plural to match 'products'. Also, 'so' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× As long as they can, they buy it the pro.

✓ As long as they can, they buy it for the brand.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear ('buy it the pro'). The correction clarifies the intended meaning by adding 'for the brand' to explain why they buy the product.