Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relax. For example, I often go shopping on weekends with my mother or friends, and we usually buy convenient items like electronics such as an iPad or a laptop.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议使用更准确的表达方式，并且用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices when shopping online. For instance, I check different apps to find the cheapest option for ordering lunch or breakfast.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语气词“uh”影响流畅性，建议减少口语填充词，句子结构可以更简洁，表达更自然。

Ví dụ: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices when shopping. If I know what I want, I buy it directly, usually choosing the cheaper or more convenient option.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且缺乏具体理由，建议完整表达观点并提供具体原因或例子支持。

Ví dụ: I think expensive products are often better because, as the saying goes, 'you get what you pay for.' For example, expensive electronics usually have better quality and last longer than cheaper ones.

× When I am go shopping I will feel very relaxing and without any anxiety such as I will buy something less straight on the weekends with my mother or with my friends and also we will buy something convenient like my iPad, like my laptop.

✓ When I am going shopping, I will feel very relaxed and without any anxiety. For example, I will buy something less expensive on the weekends with my mother or my friends, and also we will buy something convenient like my iPad or my laptop.

句子中“am go shopping”错误地使用了动词原形，正确形式应为“am going shopping”，因为进行时态需要动词的现在分词形式。

× I will buy something less straight on the weekends with my mother or with my friends and also we will buy something convenient like my iPad, like my laptop.

✓ I will buy something less expensive on the weekends with my mother or my friends, and also we will buy something convenient like my iPad or my laptop.

“less straight”用词不当，应为“less expensive”表示“更便宜的”。此外，“with my mother or with my friends”中重复使用“with”不自然，简化为“with my mother or my friends”更符合英语习惯。

× When I'm shopping online I have to compare prices like our order some delivery of my lunch or breakfast.

✓ When I'm shopping online, I have to compare prices, like when I order delivery for my lunch or breakfast.

“like our order some delivery”表达不清且语法错误，应改为“like when I order delivery”，使句子更通顺且符合英语表达习惯。

× I will compare their prices on different applications which is more which is cheaper about buy them on which application.

✓ I will compare their prices on different applications to see which is cheaper and on which application I should buy them.

句子中“which is more which is cheaper about buy them on which application”结构混乱，代词使用不当，需调整句子结构，使其表达清晰。

× I think that uh, which is cheaper or which is more convenient, I will buy it.

✓ I think that whichever is cheaper or more convenient, I will buy it.

“which is cheaper or which is more convenient”用法不当，应使用“whichever”引导选择，代词使用更准确。

× because there is an old saying over China called you get what you pay for.

✓ because there is an old saying in China called 'you get what you pay for.'

介词“over China”用法错误，正确应为“in China”，表示“在中国”。此外，引用谚语时应加引号。