Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct by directly stating your opinion and supporting it with clear reasons. Avoid generalizations like "most of the girls" and focus on your personal experience.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relax and refresh my mind. Buying things I like gives me a sense of satisfaction and happiness.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains some awkward phrasing and repetition. Use clearer linking words and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes to improve fluency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because there are many alternative products available. By comparing price and quality, I can choose the most affordable and suitable option.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains many hesitations and some grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be more specific and clear in your explanation.

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I find it difficult to choose skincare products because of conflicting customer reviews. For example, I once avoided buying a moisturizer after reading several negative reviews and decided to try a different one instead.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys the main idea but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to express your opinion more clearly and use linking words to support your points. Avoid filler words and hesitations.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. Sometimes affordable products offer better quality and value, while some expensive items may not meet expectations.

× shopping give a relaxing feel for me

✓ shopping gives a relaxing feeling for me

The subject 'shopping' is singular, so the verb should be 'gives' to agree in number. Also, 'feel' should be 'feeling' to correctly express the noun form here.

× it's most of the girls like shopping

✓ most girls like shopping

The phrase 'it's most of the girls like shopping' is incorrect. 'Most girls like shopping' is the correct plural form without 'it's' and 'of the' is unnecessary here.

× especially me really like shopping

✓ especially I really like shopping

The subject pronoun 'I' should be used instead of 'me' as the subject of the clause. Also, 'like' is correct here because 'I' is first person singular.

× because it's improve and boost my mind

✓ because it improves and boosts my mind

The verb should be in the third person singular present tense form 'improves' and 'boosts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× buying things that I like is one of the most

✓ buying things that I like is one of the most enjoyable activities

The phrase 'one of the most' is incomplete and needs a noun to complete the meaning. Adding 'enjoyable activities' clarifies the sentence.

× there is a lot of alternative product available in our market

✓ there are a lot of alternative products available in our market

'Products' should be plural to match 'a lot of', and the verb 'are' agrees with the plural subject.

× price comparison is a bitter way to find the best affordable product from a lot of opportunities

✓ price comparison is a better way to find the best affordable product among many options

'Bitter' is incorrect here; 'better' fits the context. Also, 'from a lot of opportunities' is awkward; 'among many options' is more appropriate.

× I really checked the price and quality, quality and everything about the alternative

✓ I really check the price, quality, and everything about the alternatives

'Checked' should be present tense 'check' to match the question tense. 'Alternatives' should be plural to match 'everything about' multiple options.

× some uh, skin care product make confusion on me

✓ some skin care products confuse me

'Product' should be plural 'products' to match 'some'. 'Make confusion on me' is incorrect; 'confuse me' is the correct expression.

× make confusion on me

✓ confuse me

The phrase 'make confusion on me' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'confuse me' without a preposition.

× I purchase a a moisturizer and I see the customers have bad review about that

✓ I purchased a moisturizer and I saw that customers had bad reviews about it

The verbs should be in past tense 'purchased' and 'saw' to match the past action. 'Customers have bad review' should be 'customers had bad reviews' for agreement and plural.

× customers have bad review about that

✓ customers have bad reviews about that

'Review' should be plural 'reviews' because multiple customers are involved.

× I umm, refuse that product and choose another

✓ I refused that product and chose another

The verbs should be in past tense 'refused' and 'chose' to maintain consistency with the past context.

× the money is not the exact value of the product

✓ money is not the exact value of the product

'The money' is unnecessary; 'money' as an uncountable noun does not need 'the' here.

× Sometimes we can buy affordable product with the better quality and quantity

✓ Sometimes we can buy affordable products with better quality and quantity

'Product' should be plural 'products' to match 'sometimes we can buy' implying multiple items. 'The better' should be 'better' without 'the'.

× sometimes we get the uh high-priced product that's not conducting the exact uh, good product in the uh, in that

✓ sometimes we get a high-priced product that is not exactly a good product

'Conducting' is incorrect here; 'exactly' modifies 'good product'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct preposition use.